礼貌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 답변이 의미는 전달되지만 문법과 표현이 많이 어색합니다. 문장은 현재/과거 시제 혼용, 불필요한 단어(Umm, to, run 등)와 어순 오류가 있어 자연스럽지 않습니다. 개선 포인트: 1) 주제문으로 직접 답하기(예: I learned to be polite from my parents.). 2) 과거 시제를 사용하여 구체적 행동을 서술(예: They taught me by modeling good manners and correcting me.). 3) 연결어 사용으로 문장 흐름 개선(예: For example, they always reminded me to say "please" and "thank you"). 4) 불필요한 말 줄이기(Umm, 반복) 및 문장수 3~4문장으로 유지. 연습방법: 부모가 했던 구체적인 예를 2개 정도 준비해 문장으로 만들어 연습하세요.

範例: I learned to be polite from my parents. They set an example by using polite phrases themselves and by correcting me gently when I was rude. For example, my mother always reminded me to say "please" and "thank you," and my father taught me to greet guests warmly. As a result, politeness became a habit.

建議: 의견은 분명하지만 표현이 반복되고 문법적 오류(관사, 복수·단수, 어순)와 부정확한 단어 사용( truthful 대신 comfortable 등)이 있습니다. 개선 포인트: 1) 명확한 주제문 사용(예: Yes, I believe politeness is very important.). 2) 이유를 논리적으로 연결어로 설명(예: because, for example). 3) 구체적이고 적절한 어휘 사용(comfortable, respected, approachable 등). 4) 문장 수를 2~4문장으로 간결하게 유지. 연습방법: 이유 2가지를 준비하여 각각 간단한 예시로 뒷받침하세요.

範例: Yes, I believe politeness is very important because it helps people feel comfortable and respected. For example, polite colleagues are easier to work with and polite strangers make social interactions less stressful. Therefore, being polite can improve relationships and communication.

× Umm I want to be polite as a child to from my parents.

✓ Umm I wanted to learn to be polite from my parents when I was a child.

The sentence uses incorrect prepositions and tense. Use 'learn from' not 'to from', and past tense 'wanted' fits the past context 'as a child'. Also include 'when I was a child' for clarity. Suggestion: say 'I wanted to learn to be polite from my parents when I was a child.'

× My parents especially wanted make me very polite person so they always point the polite action so I run.

✓ My parents especially wanted to make me a very polite person, so they always pointed out polite actions and corrected me when I didn’t behave properly.

Multiple issues: missing 'to' after 'wanted' (infinitive), missing article 'a' before 'very polite person', incorrect verb forms ('point' should be 'pointed out' in past), and the fragment 'so I run' is incorrect and unclear. Use past tense consistently. Suggestion: use 'wanted to make me a very polite person,' 'pointed out polite actions,' and replace 'so I run' with a clear verb phrase like 'and corrected me.'

× Yes, I think being polite is very important.

✓ Yes, I think being being polite is very important.

This sentence is actually acceptable, but based on the list the gerund 'being' is correctly used. No correction needed; keep as 'I think being polite is very important.' Note: maintain gerund form after 'think'.

× Umm, I think many people want to make relation with a polite person and for example many people want to talk with polite person because they makes them feel very good and very truthful.

✓ Umm, I think many people want to form relationships with polite people; for example, many people want to talk with polite people because they make them feel comfortable and respected.

Errors: 'make relation with' should be 'form relationships with' or 'have a relationship with'; use plural 'people' consistently; 'polite person' should be 'polite people' for general statements; subject-verb agreement: 'they makes' should be 'they make'; 'feel very good and very truthful' is unnatural—use 'comfortable and respected.' Maintain present simple for general truths. Suggested phrasing: 'many people want to form relationships with polite people ... because they make them feel comfortable and respected.'