礼貌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 句子结构和表达需要更自然、连贯。回答应该先直接给出主题句（例如：我从父母那里学会的），然后用一两句具体细节支持（例如父母怎样教、举例场景）。避免犹豫词和语法错误（如“remind of me”“have to speak. Please”）。连接词可以用because/for example/they taught me to…等，使回答更流畅。

範例: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. For example, they always told me to say "please" and "thank you" and to wait my turn when someone else is speaking. Because they consistently corrected me and praised good manners, I gradually made politeness a habit.

建議: 回答方向正确，但表述可以更自然并提供更具体的原因或例子。应先给出明确观点，然后用一至两句解释或举例（例如：politeness helps build relationships, shows respect in workplaces）。注意词汇搭配（比如 say “important” rather than “very significant”, and “people you meet” not “the persons who you know or you meet”）。

範例: Yes, I believe being polite is very important because it shows respect and helps build good relationships. For instance, polite behaviour at work can make colleagues cooperate more easily, and saying "thank you" makes people feel appreciated.

× They always remind of me that I have to speak.

✓ They always reminded me that I have to speak politely.

句中“remind of me”是不正确的短语搭配。正确用法是“remind someone (that...)”或“remind someone to do something”。另外原句缺少“politely”以表达“有礼貌地说话”的意思。建议句型：They always reminded me to speak politely.（他们总是提醒我要有礼貌地说话。）

× They always remind of me that I have to speak.

✓ They always reminded me that I have to speak politely.

此句中动词时态与前后语境（过去回忆）更自然用过去式“reminded”。文章要求只改符合清单的类型，但时态问题属于“Past tense issue”（ID 5）；在这里主要错误是搭配和时态同时存在，因此改为过去式更恰当。说明：在描述过去发生的习惯或教导时，用过去式更自然（他们以前总是提醒我）。

× Please especially ask for the other person's help.

✓ They especially taught me to ask others for help.

原句‘Please especially ask for the other person's help.’结构不自然且代词使用不当。学生想表达父母教他要向别人请求帮助，需改为被动或强调教导的动词：‘taught me to ask others for help’。同时‘the other person’不合上下文，改为泛指的‘others’或‘sometimes others’更自然。

× So I think my parents UMM really has significant impact on me.

✓ So I think my parents really had a significant impact on me.

原句中主语是复数“my parents”，谓语却用单数“has”，这属于主谓一致错误（Subject-verb agreement）。另外句子在回忆过去应使用过去式“had a significant impact”。建议：主语为复数时谓语应使用复数形式（在一般现在时为“have”，过去时为“had”）。因此改为“My parents really had a significant impact on me.”（我的父母确实对我有重大影响。）

× I think to be polite is very significant for everyone because it shows the respect and responsibility for the persons who you know or you meet.

✓ I think being polite is very important for everyone because it shows respect and responsibility towards the people you know or meet.

原句存在多处问题：1) 不定式“to be polite”在此作主语不如动名词“being polite”自然，属于动词形式用法（但清单中相关最接近的是“Verb + -ing form”）；2) “shows the respect”中“the”不必要，应该用不可数名词“respect”；3) “the persons who you know or you meet”结构生硬，英文更自然为“the people you know or meet”或直接“people you meet”。建议用法：‘being polite’作主语，去掉不必要的定冠词，并用‘people’替代过于正式的‘persons’。中文建议：使用动名词做主语，删除多余定冠词，使用更自然的名词短语。