礼貌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答需要更直接并保持自然流畅。可以先用一句主题句交代主要信息，然后用一两句具体细节（如父母怎样教、什么时候学会、例子）来丰富内容，避免过多的填充词（uh, umm, yeah）和语法小错误（如时态和主谓一致）。使用连接词（for example, when, so）让表达更连贯。

範例: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. For example, they always told me to greet people when I met them, even if they were strangers. They also taught me to say 'thank you' and 'sorry' in everyday situations, so politeness became a habit as I grew up.

建議: 答案要更有逻辑并使用准确语法。先给出明确立场（Yes, I do），然后用一到两句理由支持，最好举具体结果或例子。避免重复和填充词，注意主语和动词形式（e.g. "if everyone acted politely"）。加入连接词（because, therefore, as a result）能增强条理性。

範例: Yes, I do think politeness is very important. If everyone acted politely towards each other, conflicts would be reduced and people would feel more respected. For instance, polite behavior at work can improve teamwork and make daily life more pleasant.

× As far as I can recall, I'm usually taught by my parents.

✓ As far as I can recall, I was usually taught by my parents.

句子使用现在时态“I'm usually taught”与“as far as I can recall”（回忆过去）时间线不一致。这里说的是“小时候被教导”的过去经历，应使用过去时“was taught”。建议将动词改为过去时以匹配时间背景。

× My parents often tell me to make simple greetings to uh, person I saw.

✓ My parents often told me to make simple greetings to people I saw.

原句中“tell me to”表达为过去习惯应与整体过去时一致；“person I saw”不自然且与“often”搭配应为复数“people”。另外，把“tell”改为过去时“told”更符合回忆过去的语境。建议使用’people I saw’或’people I met’并将动词改为过去时。

× Umm, even they are strangers, yeah.

✓ Umm, even if they were strangers.

原句中“even they are strangers”结构不完整且时态不匹配。应使用连词“even if”引导条件从句，且整段叙述为过去习惯，用过去时“were”更合适。建议使用“even if they were strangers”或“even when they were strangers”。

× Yeah, from my perspective, being polite is a symbol of morality.

✓ Yeah, from my perspective, being polite is a sign of morality.

语法上“is a symbol of morality”并非时态错误，但“symbol of morality”搭配稍不自然，改为“sign of morality”更地道。保留现在时，因为这是普遍观点。但若严格按类型列表，此处归为一般现在时使用，建议保持现在时表普遍真理。

× Uh, because if everyone being applied to, uh, to each other, umm, our society can be more peaceful and full of love, yeah.

✓ Uh, because if everyone applied that to each other, our society could be more peaceful and full of love.

原句“if everyone being applied to”语法错误：在条件句中应使用动词的过去式“applied”或使用被动结构需重写。此处意思是“如果每个人都把礼貌应用到彼此身上”，建议使用“applied that to”或“practiced it towards”。同时主句中的情态动词从“can”改为与过去假设相对应的“could”。所以将条件从句改为“if everyone applied that to each other”并把结果句改为“our society could be more peaceful and full of love”。