礼貌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 質問に直接答え、論理的に具体例を示す練習をしましょう。まず「どのように学んだか」を明確に述べ（トピック文）、続けて教師や親、学校での具体的な出来事や習慣を結びつける説明を付けます。接続詞（for example, because, so, when）を使って文をつなぎ、冗長な繰り返しやあいまいな表現を避けてください。発音や文法上の不自然さ（時制や代名詞の誤用）も注意しましょう。例：短く自然に、最大5文で答える。

範例: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents and school. For example, my parents taught me to say "please" and "thank you" every day, and teachers at junior high emphasized bowing and respectful language. Because these habits were practiced at home and school, they became natural to me. As a result, I still use polite expressions in formal situations.

建議: 答えは肯定するならまず明確な主張を示し、その理由を具体的に述べましょう。例や比較（e.g., in restaurants, at work, when meeting elders）を用いて説得力を持たせ、あいまいな語（alight, behave the blindness）や不要な言いよどみを避けてください。理由を示すときは接続詞（because, for example, therefore）で文をつなぎ、語彙は状況に合った単語（e.g., greet politely, show respect）を使ってください。回答は3〜5文にまとめましょう。

範例: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it shows respect and helps build good relationships. For example, in restaurants or business meetings, polite language and manners make others feel comfortable. In Japan, politeness is especially valued, so using respectful phrases can create trust and smoother communication.

× You will believe when I was a child, I I went to the junior high school, so the junior high school. So I ran about gladness and in more details.

✓ You might not believe it, but when I was a child I went to junior high school. I felt very happy there and can tell you more details.

The original sentence has several sentence structure issues: unclear modal use ('You will believe' should be 'You might not believe it'), repeated words ('I I'), unnecessary article use ('the junior high school' should be 'junior high school' or 'the junior high school I attended'), and fragmented clauses ('So I ran about gladness' is ungrammatical). Suggestion: divide into clear sentences, use appropriate modal verbs ('might'), remove duplicate words, use correct noun phrases, and use verbs that match meaning ('felt very happy' instead of 'ran about gladness').

× Yes, of course, umm, for example, when I alight at the executive restaurant, umm is really important to uh, behave the blindness. So in Japan, especially in the important thing and the politeness.

✓ Yes, of course. For example, when I dine at a formal restaurant, it is very important to behave politely. In Japan, politeness is especially important.

This sentence has multiple structure and word choice problems: 'alight at the executive restaurant' is incorrect—use 'dine at a formal restaurant'; 'behave the blindness' is meaningless—use 'behave politely'; awkward phrasing 'is really important to uh' should be 'it is very important to'; fragment 'So in Japan, especially in the important thing and the politeness' should be rephrased to 'In Japan, politeness is especially important.' Suggestion: choose correct verbs and adverbs, use clear subject+verb clauses, and prefer natural collocations ('dine at', 'behave politely', 'politeness is important').