礼貌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 可改进点： 1) 直接回应并用主题句开头，例如指出主要方式（看教育类视频）以更清晰。2) 语言更自然，修正语法错误（如冠词、动词形式和介词），并避免重复。3) 增加具体细节（举例某种礼貌行为或描述视频内容）并使用连接词（for example, such as）使表达连贯。4) 控制长度，不超过5句，保持流畅。

範例: I learned to be polite mainly by watching educational videos when I was a child. These videos taught basic manners, such as saying “please” and “thank you” and greeting people with a smile. For example, one cartoon showed children apologizing when they bumped into someone, which helped me remember to say sorry. Overall, those videos gave me clear examples of polite behaviour.

建議: 可改进点： 1) 开头用明确的主题句直接回答（Yes, I think...），并用连词扩展理由。2) 修正词汇和拼写错误（例如“ply”应为“politeness”或“polite behaviour”），改正搭配（greet people / greet others）。3) 提供具体原因和例子（例如促进沟通、减少冲突），用连接词如 because, for instance 增强逻辑性。4) 保持回答简洁，2–4句最佳。

範例: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it helps people get along and reduces misunderstandings. For instance, greeting someone with a smile or saying “please” and “thank you” creates a friendly atmosphere. Being polite also makes communication smoother, especially in public or professional settings.

× There were many videos about how to greet with other people and this video tells us to be a polite.

✓ There were many videos about how to greet other people, and this video told us to be polite.

问题类型：动词 + -ing 形式（同时涉及时态和搭配错误）。原句中“how to greet with other people”是不正确的搭配，动词greet后不加介词with，正确为“greet other people”。此外对过去的经历应使用过去时，前半句用过去时“were”，后半句应一致用过去时“told”。“be a polite”中“polite”是形容词，不可与不定冠词a连用；应为“be polite”。建议：删去“with”，把第二部分动词改为过去式“told”，并把“be a polite”改为“be polite”。

× In my opinion, we should greet with other with a smile or say something which is polite.

✓ In my opinion, we should greet others with a smile or say something polite.

问题类型：形容词/副词使用错误。原句中“greet with other”搭配不当，正确结构为“greet others”或“greet other people”；“say something which is polite”冗长且不自然，英语中更常用“say something polite”。建议：把“greet with other”改为“greet others”，把“say something which is polite”简化为“say something polite”。

× Sure, ply plays a significant role in community.

✓ Sure, politeness plays a significant role in the community.

问题类型：代词/词汇使用错误（接近代词错误类别）。原句“ply”显然是拼写错误，应为“politeness”或“being polite”。此外“in community”缺少冠词，通常应为“in the community”。建议：将“ply”改为“politeness”，并在“community”前加定冠词“the”。