礼貌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答总体清楚且直接回应了问题，但可以更自然并提供更多具体细节与连贯衔接词。注意避免重复（例如两次提到“polite”/“respect”），并在举例时补充具体场景或确切做法，如用哪些礼貌用语、何时需要行礼或帮忙。可将句子控制在不超过5句内，使用连接词如“for instance”“also”使表达更流畅。

範例: My parents taught me manners from a young age. For instance, they insisted I always greet elders with a polite “Good morning” and use formal titles like “Mr.” or “Auntie.” They also taught me to stand up when an older person enters the room and to offer help carrying things. These habits became natural because they explained why respect matters.

建議: 回答观点明确，但句子未完结且有省略（最后一句不完整），导致表达不够连贯和具体。应补充完整结论并提供更具体的理由或对比（例如与其他国家的不同、具体情境下的好处），使用连接词如“therefore”“for example”来增强逻辑性。注意控制句子数量与长度，避免泛泛而谈。

範例: Yes, I believe politeness is very important, especially in China, because it reflects respect and helps social harmony. For example, showing deference to elders can strengthen family bonds and prevent conflicts in public. Compared with more informal cultures, Chinese people often follow specific etiquette, which makes everyday interactions smoother and more predictable. Therefore, good manners benefit both individuals and communities.

× For example, people often show respect to elders and follow certain social manners in public, so good manners help maintain.

✓ For example, people often show respect to elders and follow certain social manners in public, so good manners help maintain social harmony.

句子末尾“help maintain”后缺少宾语，导致句子结构不完整，属于句子结构错误。应补充具体宾语使句意完整；这里根据上下文补为“social harmony”（社会和谐）。建议：写句子时确保动词后的宾语或补语完整，或改写为被动或名词短语。