纸— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答内容丰富，也给出了纸飞机、纸鹤和贺卡等具体例子。但第一句过长，缺少停顿和连接；“on orange gummy”表达不清，可能需要确认想说的是“origami（折纸）”还是其他内容。注意区分一般过去时和现在完成时，并将两句拆开。

範例: Yes, I made quite a few paper crafts when I was younger. I especially enjoyed making paper airplanes and origami cranes, which I learned to fold from my friends. I also made birthday cards and paper decorations for festivals.

建議: 回答直接，细节具体，能够清楚说明画画的内容和分享作品的感受。建议用句号分开较长的内容；“creation”应改为复数“creations”，因为你提到了多幅作品。也可以用“showing them to”替代略显夸张的“showing off”。

範例: When I was a child, I loved drawing and colouring. I would spend hours sketching my family, pets, and favourite cartoon characters. I also enjoyed showing my colourful creations to my friends and family.

建議: 回答直接，也给出了写信的场合和原因。注意主谓一致：应说“writing letters is”。结尾“digital say treats”无法表达清楚，建议换成“digital messages”或“text messages”，并通过“because”自然说明纸质信件更有个人感。

範例: Yes, I still write physical letters from time to time, especially for birthdays or holidays. I think writing a letter is more personal and meaningful than sending a digital message because it takes more time and effort.

建議: 观点明确，并用速度和便利性解释原因。注意“testing”应为“texting”；“handwriting letters”应改为“handwritten letters”，且这里可说“has become”或直接用复数主语“letters have become”。第一句较长，建议拆句。

範例: Not as much as they used to, to be honest. Most people prefer texting or emailing because it is quicker and more convenient. As a result, handwritten letters have become quite rare, especially among younger people.

建議: 回答中有习惯、用途和个人看法，内容方向很好，但多处表达不清，且句子过长。“join down”应为“jot down”；“do if I have some free chart”可能想表达“doodle when I have some free time”。请分句表达，并用“Also”或“because”连接补充信息。

範例: Yes, I always carry a notebook and a pen with me. I like to jot down notes or ideas whenever they come to me, and sometimes I sketch or doodle when I have some free time. I find it more reliable than using my phone for notes.

× Yes, I have made quite a few paper crafts when I was younger.

✓ Yes, I made quite a few paper crafts when I was younger.

“When I was younger”明确表示过去的时间，不能与表示现在完成时的“have made”搭配。应使用一般过去时“made”。

× Yes, I have made quite a few paper crafts when I was younger I loved making paper airplanes on orange gummy, especially paper cranes which I learned from my friends.

✓ Yes, I have made quite a few paper crafts when I was younger. I loved making paper airplanes on orange gummy, especially paper cranes which I learned from my friends.

原句中“when I was younger”和“I loved making...”之间缺少句号或其他连接方式，造成两个完整句子直接相连。应在此处断句。

× I would spend hours sketching my family, pets and favourite cartoon characters and I really enjoyed showing off my colourful creation to my friends and family.

✓ I would spend hours sketching my family, pets and favourite cartoon characters, and I really enjoyed showing off my colourful creations to my friends and family.

这里提到画了家人、宠物和多个卡通人物，语境指向多幅作品，因此用复数“creations”更合适。

× I used to love drawing and colouring on paper when I was little I would spend hours sketching my family, pets and favourite cartoon characters and I really enjoyed showing off my colourful creation to my friends and family.

✓ I used to love drawing and colouring on paper when I was little. I would spend hours sketching my family, pets and favourite cartoon characters, and I really enjoyed showing off my colourful creation to my friends and family.

“when I was little”和“I would spend...”之间缺少句子边界，导致两个完整句子连在一起。可用句号分开；并列的后半部分可用逗号帮助区分结构。

× I feel that writing letters are much more personal and meaningful than digital say treats.

✓ I feel that writing letters is much more personal and meaningful than digital say treats.

“writing letters”是动名词短语，在这里整体作单数主语，因此谓语动词应使用“is”，而不是“are”。

× Handwriting letters have become quite rare, especially among younger generations.

✓ Handwriting letters has become quite rare, especially among younger generations.

“Handwriting letters”作为动名词短语整体作单数主语，所以现在完成时应使用“has become”，而不是“have become”。

× Yes, I always carry a notebook and a pen with me I like to join down notes or ideas whenever they come to me and sometimes I even sketch or do if I have some free chart honestly I find it more reliable than using my phone for notes.

✓ Yes, I always carry a notebook and a pen with me. I like to join down notes or ideas whenever they come to me, and sometimes I even sketch or do if I have some free chart. Honestly, I find it more reliable than using my phone for notes.

原句把多个完整句子直接连在一起，缺少必要的句号或逗号。应在“with me”后和“free chart”后断句，并在并列内容之间使用逗号。