纸— Part 1 評分報告

建議: This is a strong, natural answer with a clear topic sentence, relevant examples, and effective linking. To sound slightly more concise and precise, avoid listing too many items and explain when you might try paper crafts again. Your use of “Although” is effective.

範例: Yes, I have. When I was younger, I often made paper flowers and origami animals because I enjoyed turning a simple sheet of paper into something creative. I do not do it much nowadays, but I would like to make some handmade cards during my next holiday.

建議: The answer is relevant and includes specific details, but there are two language problems. Use “on special occasions” or “for special occasions,” not “on a special occasions,” and complete the final idea, for example, “brought me a lot of happiness.” Add a linking word such as “so” before the result.

範例: When I was a child, I particularly enjoyed drawing pictures and making colorful greeting cards for my family. I decorated them with different colors and patterns, so each card looked unique. Looking back, those activities were simple, but they brought me a lot of happiness.

建議: This is a well-organized and natural response. You directly answer the question, give a clear reason, and provide a thoughtful contrast between digital messages and letters. To make it more personal and specific, mention a realistic situation in which you have written or would write a letter.

範例: Not really. I usually use messaging apps because they are faster and more convenient. However, handwritten letters feel more personal, so I would write one for a close friend’s birthday or to express my feelings on a special occasion.

建議: The answer has a clear opinion, relevant examples, and a good explanation of sentimental value. However, the final word “even” is unfinished and should be removed or followed by a complete idea. You could also make the answer more effective by adding a specific example of a memory that a letter might preserve.

範例: Yes, I think many people still keep them, especially if they were written by someone close to them. For example, they may save love letters, birthday cards, or notes from family members. These items have sentimental value because they preserve memories of important people and special moments.

建議: You answer the question directly and give a useful comparison between your phone and stationery. However, the final sentence is incomplete: finish it with a purpose, such as “when I’m studying” or “when I’m brainstorming.” You could also avoid repeating “write” by using “record” or “jot down.”

範例: Not all the time. I usually rely on my mobile phone because it lets me take notes, set reminders, and store information. However, I sometimes carry a pen and a small notebook when I am studying or need to jot something down quickly. I find handwriting especially useful when I am brainstorming ideas.

× I particularly enjoyed making greeting cards for my family on a special occasions.

✓ I particularly enjoyed making greeting cards for my family on special occasions.

The plural noun occasions cannot be used with the singular article a. Remove a, or use the singular form occasion with a: on a special occasion.

× I particularly enjoyed making greeting cards for my family on a special occasions.

✓ I particularly enjoyed making greeting cards for my family on special occasions.

The article a is incorrect before the plural noun occasions. Use no article when speaking about special occasions in general.

× Looking back, those activities were simple but brought me.

✓ Looking back, those activities were simple but brought me a lot of joy.

The verb brought needs a clear object or complement. The sentence is incomplete because brought me does not explain what the activities brought you. Add a noun phrase such as a lot of joy.

× These things often have sentimental value because they remind people of special moments in their lives, even.

✓ These things often have sentimental value because they remind people of special moments in their lives, even today.

The adverb even is left without a clear connection at the end of the sentence. Adding today creates the complete expression even today and clearly indicates that this remains true in the present.

× I still find handwriting useful, particularly when I'm.

✓ I still find handwriting useful, particularly when I'm studying or writing something down.

The clause when I'm is incomplete because the verb am requires a complement. Add a present participle phrase, such as studying or writing something down, to complete the sentence.