纸— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly and use more natural expressions. Say “made of paper” rather than “all of paper,” and use the past tense “decorated” with the noun phrase “cut-outs and colored markers.” Add one specific detail about the card’s design to make the answer more vivid.

範例: Yes, I have. I once made a greeting card out of paper for my friend’s birthday. I decorated it with colorful cut-outs and markers, and I wrote a short personal message inside. My friend really appreciated the effort.

建議: The answer is relevant and well developed, but keep the verb tense consistent by changing “make” to “made.” Use a linking phrase such as “For example” before listing the items, and briefly explain which activity you enjoyed most or why.

範例: When I was a child, I liked folding paper into different shapes. For example, I made paper frogs, airplanes, and little boats. I especially enjoyed making airplanes because I could fly them around the house and compare whose plane went the farthest.

建議: The main ideas are appropriate, but the answer needs clearer sentence structure and accurate word choices. Add “it” after “mind,” use “text messages” in the comparison, and replace the unclear phrase “harming notes” with “handwritten notes.” Also include the subject “I” in “I usually send.”

範例: Yes, I still occasionally write physical letters. Putting my thoughts on paper helps clear my mind, and it feels more personal than sending a text message. For example, I usually send handwritten notes to close friends on birthdays or other special occasions to show that I appreciate them.

建議: Give a clear opinion first, then explain the contrast between the past and the present. Use correct forms such as “handwritten letters,” “fewer people,” and “technology has made communication easier.” Avoid repeating “technology” and finish with a specific reason or example.

範例: Yes, some people still keep handwritten letters, especially if they have sentimental value. However, fewer people do this than in the past because technology has made communication much easier and faster. For example, people usually send messages or emails now, but they may keep letters from loved ones as special memories.

建議: State clearly what you carry and correct the confusing vocabulary and grammar. Say “a small notebook” instead of “a small knot,” “pens” instead of “pants,” and “an address” instead of “a dress.” You can also explain that you carry pens because you sometimes need to make quick notes.

範例: I don’t usually carry paper with me, but I do carry one or two pens in my backpack. Sometimes I need to write something down quickly, such as an address or a reminder. If I need paper, I usually use a small notebook or a sheet of paper from work.

× Yes, I have made a greeting card all of paper.

✓ Yes, I have made a greeting card out of paper.

Use out of to describe the material used to make something. All of paper is not the natural prepositional expression in this sentence.

× I made it for my friend's birthday and decorated it with cut out and colored markers.

✓ I made it for my friend's birthday and decorated it with cutouts and colored markers.

Cutouts is a plural countable noun because the sentence refers to decorative paper shapes in general. The noun should be written as one word when it is used in this meaning.

× I often make paper frogs, paper airplanes and little boats because I enjoy folding and playing with them.

✓ I often made paper frogs, paper airplanes, and little boats because I enjoyed folding and playing with them.

The answer describes a repeated activity in childhood, so the past tense should be used consistently: made and enjoyed. Use the past tense when talking about completed habits or activities in the past.

× Yes, I still sometimes write physical letters because putting my thoughts on paper helps clear my mind feels more personal than text message.

✓ Yes, I still sometimes write physical letters because putting my thoughts on paper helps clear my mind and feels more personal than text messages.

The two verb phrases helps clear my mind and feels more personal need to be joined with the conjunction and. Text messages should be plural when referring to messages in general.

× For example, usually send harming notes to close friends on special occasions to make them feel appreciated.

✓ For example, I usually send handwritten notes to close friends on special occasions to make them feel appreciated.

A complete English sentence needs a subject before the verb, so I must be added before usually send. Handwritten notes is the natural expression for notes written by hand.

× Yes, people still keep handwriting letter to tip But is fewer than before because the technology is progressing it more easier so people like to use technology but with handwriting letters also.

✓ Yes, people still keep handwritten letters, but there are fewer than before because technology has made communication easier, so people prefer to use technology instead of handwritten letters.

Use handwritten, the past participle form, as an adjective before letters. Letters must be plural because the sentence refers to letters in general. Use there are fewer to express the existence of a smaller number of plural items. Fewer is used with countable nouns, while easier is the correct comparative form of easy. The conjunctions but and so are needed to connect the contrasting and resulting ideas clearly. Technology is usually used without the definite article when speaking about technology in general.

× I don't usually carry paper because it's easy to fold or loose pile white burn pens in my back because sometimes I need to write something quickly.

✓ I don't usually carry paper because it is easy to fold or lose. However, I carry a couple of pens in my bag because sometimes I need to write something quickly.

Use lose as the verb meaning misplace; loose is an adjective meaning not tight. The original sentence contains unclear and incorrectly connected phrases, so it should be divided into two sentences. Use in my bag, not in my back, to describe where the pens are kept. However clearly introduces the contrast between not carrying paper and carrying pens.

× For example, I keep one or two pants in a small knot to jot down a dress or reminder.

✓ For example, I keep one or two pens in a small notebook to jot down an address or a reminder.

Pens is the correct plural noun because one or two refers to more than one possible item. Use an address because address begins with a vowel sound, and use a reminder because reminder is a singular countable noun. A small notebook is the natural phrase for a place in which to write notes.