纸— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question directly in the present perfect: “Yes, I have.” Correct the grammar in “I had making” and “enjoy to play” by using “I have made” and “enjoy playing.” Use “paper,” not “pepper,” and avoid repeating “I also enjoy.” Add one specific example of a paper craft you have made.

範例: Yes, I have made several paper crafts because I’m a designer. I enjoy experimenting with different types of paper and textures, especially when I’m journaling. I probably use more paper than I should, but I find it very relaxing.

建議: Begin with a clear topic sentence, such as “I loved making paper planes.” Correct “A memories” to “One of my memories,” “me and my cousins” to “my cousins and I,” and “paper plan” to “paper plane.” Explain the competition more naturally by describing whose plane could fly the farthest, and use past tense consistently.

範例: When I was a child, I loved making paper planes with my cousins. We used to compete to see whose plane could fly the farthest from the starting point. It was simple, but we found it really exciting.

建議: The answer is direct and relevant, but avoid repeating “physical letter.” Clarify the unclear phrase “stickers and kitchen,” and use the present tense if this is a current habit rather than “I used to.” Add a linking word such as “For example” before describing why you write to friends who live far away.

範例: Yes, I still write physical letters, especially to close friends. For example, I sometimes send letters with stickers and small gifts to online friends or people who live far away. I enjoy doing this because it feels more personal than sending a message.

建議: Your opinion and personal example are clear, but use more natural expressions: “some people,” “handwritten letters,” and “sentimental people.” Replace “the letters that I received” with the more natural “letters I receive” if you mean a general habit. Avoid repeating “some of the people” and finish with a concise conclusion.

範例: Yes, some people still keep handwritten letters, especially sentimental people like me. I keep and archive letters from my friends and family because they remind me of important moments. Although digital messages are more convenient, handwritten letters feel more meaningful.

建議: Give a clear reason and correct the unclear vocabulary. “One band on my bed” and “paper and pants” do not fit the context; you probably mean “a pen in my bag” and “paper and pens.” Use “just in case I need to write something down” and organize the answer into two clear sentences.

範例: Yes, I usually carry a small notebook and a pen in my bag. I bring them just in case I need to write down an idea, a reminder, or something important. They are especially useful when I’m away from my phone.

× I had making a crafts with papers and I'm a designer.

✓ I have made crafts with paper, and I'm a designer.

The present perfect form have made is needed because the question asks whether you have ever made crafts. Had making is not a correct verb form. Use have or has followed by the past participle for present perfect experiences.

× I had making a crafts with papers and I'm a designer.

✓ I have made crafts with paper, and I'm a designer.

Crafts is a plural countable noun, so it cannot follow the singular article a. Paper is usually uncountable when referring to the material, so it does not normally take a plural ending in this context.

× I also enjoy to play with some paper and texture and I also enjoy journaling so I tend to use more pepper than I should use.

✓ I also enjoy playing with some paper and texture, and I also enjoy journaling, so I tend to use more pepper than I should use.

The verb enjoy must be followed by a gerund ending in -ing, not by the infinitive with to. Use enjoy playing, enjoy reading, or enjoy making.

× A memories from my childhood about paper is the one me and my cousins become competitive to make a paper plan who can fly a far from the point we start to fly it.

✓ A memory from my childhood about paper is when my cousins and I became competitive about making a paper plan to see whose could fly farther from the point where we started flying it.

Memory must be singular after the singular article a. The singular verb is is also compatible with the singular subject a memory. Use a memory when describing one recollection.

× A memories from my childhood about paper is the one me and my cousins become competitive to make a paper plan who can fly a far from the point we start to fly it.

✓ A memory from my childhood about paper is when my cousins and I became competitive about making a paper plan to see whose could fly farther from the point where we started flying it.

The events happened during childhood, so the past forms became and started are required. Use the simple past to describe completed events in the past.

× A memories from my childhood about paper is the one me and my cousins become competitive to make a paper plan who can fly a far from the point we start to fly it.

✓ A memory from my childhood about paper is when my cousins and I became competitive about making a paper plan to see whose could fly farther from the point where we started flying it.

My cousins and I is the subject of became, so the subject pronoun I must be used. Me is an object pronoun and should not be used as part of a compound subject.

× A memories from my childhood about paper is the one me and my cousins become competitive to make a paper plan who can fly a far from the point we start to fly it.

✓ A memory from my childhood about paper is when my cousins and I became competitive about making a paper plan to see whose could fly farther from the point where we started flying it.

When comparing the distances that paper plans can fly, use the comparative adverb farther. A far is not a correct comparative form.

× A memories from my childhood about paper is the one me and my cousins become competitive to make a paper plan who can fly a far from the point we start to fly it.

✓ A memory from my childhood about paper is when my cousins and I became competitive about making a paper plan to see whose could fly farther from the point where we started flying it.

The natural preposition is competitive about when describing an activity or idea that causes competition. Also, use from the point where to identify the starting location correctly.

× A memories from my childhood about paper is the one me and my cousins become competitive to make a paper plan who can fly a far from the point we start to fly it.

✓ A memory from my childhood about paper is when my cousins and I became competitive about making a paper plan to see whose could fly farther from the point where we started flying it.

The original sentence combines several clauses without the necessary structure. Use when to introduce the childhood event and to see whose to explain what the competition was about.

× Of course, I still write physical letters especially for my friends. I used to write a physical letter to send a package of stickers and kitchen for my Internet friends or just my friends who live far away from me.

✓ Of course, I still write physical letters, especially to my friends. I used to write physical letters to send packages of stickers and kitchen items to my Internet friends or simply to friends who live far away from me.

Write a letter to someone is the standard expression, so to is required before the recipient. Send something to someone also requires to before the recipient.

× Of course, I still write physical letters especially for my friends. I used to write a physical letter to send a package of stickers and kitchen for my Internet friends or just my friends who live far away from me.

✓ Of course, I still write physical letters, especially to my friends. I used to write physical letters to send packages of stickers and kitchen items to my Internet friends or simply to friends who live far away from me.

The answer describes a repeated past habit, so the plural forms letters, packages, and friends are more appropriate. Use singular nouns only when referring to one specific letter, package, or friend.

× Some of the people still keep the handwritten, especially when they are the sentimental type of person like me.

✓ Some people still keep handwritten letters, especially when they are the sentimental type of people like me.

The expression some people is more natural when speaking generally. The definite article the is unnecessary before handwritten letters because the speaker is not referring to a specific previously mentioned set of letters.

× Some of the people still keep the handwritten, especially when they are the sentimental type of person like me.

✓ Some people still keep handwritten letters, especially when they are the sentimental type of people like me.

The plural pronoun they refers to people, so the following noun should also be plural: people, not person. Use type of people when describing a group.

× Some of the people still keep the handwritten, especially when they are the sentimental type of person like me.

✓ Some people still keep handwritten letters, especially when they are the sentimental type of people like me.

Handwritten is an adjective and cannot function as the noun by itself in this sentence. Add the noun letters to complete the noun phrase.

× Yes, I usually bring my notebooks and one band on my bed just in because there's something I had to write or I meant something, someone important that I have to keep notes.

✓ Yes, I usually bring my notebooks and one band on my bed just in case there is something I have to write or someone important I need to take notes about.

The fixed conjunction is just in case, not just in. Just in case introduces a possible situation or reason for carrying something.

× Yes, I usually bring my notebooks and one band on my bed just in because there's something I had to write or I meant something, someone important that I have to keep notes.

✓ Yes, I usually bring my notebooks and one band on my bed just in case there is something I have to write or someone important I need to take notes about.

The adverb usually describes a current habit, so the present forms have to write and need to take notes are appropriate. Had to write refers to a past obligation and does not fit this present-time context.

× Yes, I usually bring my notebooks and one band on my bed just in because there's something I had to write or I meant something, someone important that I have to keep notes.

✓ Yes, I usually bring my notebooks and one band on my bed just in case there is something I have to write or someone important I need to take notes about.

The original sentence contains incomplete and disconnected phrases, especially I meant something, someone important. Use parallel clauses: something I have to write or someone important I need to take notes about.