纸— Part 1 評分報告

建議: The answer contains a misunderstanding and several inaccurate expressions. “PayPal” should probably be “paper,” and “make an aircraft” should be “make a paper airplane.” Use the present perfect to talk about life experience: “I’ve never made...” Then add one clear contrasting detail about making something with plastic at primary school.

範例: No, I’ve never made a paper airplane or any other paper crafts. However, I once made a small craft out of plastic when I was in primary school. It was a simple project, but I enjoyed making it.

建議: Answer directly in the past tense because the question asks about childhood. Combine the sentence fragments and avoid repetition of “paper.” Explain what you enjoyed and give one specific example, such as drawing cartoons or writing short stories. Use linking words such as “especially” or “because” to make the response more natural.

範例: When I was a child, I mainly used paper to draw pictures and write short stories. I especially enjoyed drawing cartoons because it allowed me to be creative. Sometimes, I also used colored pencils to make my drawings more attractive.

建議: Use the present simple for a current habit: “No, I don’t write...” The answer should explain that emails are more convenient, rather than calling them a type of recycling, which is unclear in this context. Also use the plural form “emails” and the correct pronoun “send them.”

範例: No, I don’t write physical letters anymore. I usually send emails or messages because they are faster and more convenient. They also make it easy to communicate with people who live far away.

建議: Give a clear answer first and then explain why. Replace “the old generation people” with “older people” or “the older generation.” Use “letters are meaningful memories” instead of saying they are “their memories,” and clarify that letters help people remember important relationships or events. Pay attention to subject–verb agreement: “letters are,” not “letters is.”

範例: Yes, especially older people still keep handwritten letters. They often see them as meaningful memories of family members or close friends. For example, an old letter from a loved one can remind them of an important period in their lives.

建議: Use the present simple for a regular habit: “No, I don’t usually carry...” Improve the sentence structure by avoiding multiple clauses joined together without punctuation. Say “my phone or tablet is easier to carry,” and explain that you use it to take notes and set reminders so you do not forget things. A brief example would make the answer more specific.

範例: No, I don’t usually carry paper and pens when I go out. I prefer using my phone because it is lighter and more convenient. I can take notes and set reminders on it, so I’m less likely to forget important things.

× No, I didn't have the experience by using PayPal to make an aircraft. I just have the experience by using the plastic to make a craft in primary school.

✓ No, I didn't have experience using PayPal to make an aircraft. I only have experience using plastic to make a craft in primary school.

Experience is used as an uncountable noun when referring to general knowledge or practice, so the definite article the is unnecessary. Also, only is more natural than just in this context.

× No, I didn't have the experience by using PayPal to make an aircraft. I just have the experience by using the plastic to make a craft in primary school.

✓ No, I haven't had experience using PayPal to make an aircraft. I only had experience using plastic to make a craft in primary school.

The question asks about life experience, so the present perfect haven't had is more appropriate in the first sentence. The second sentence refers to a finished period in the past, so had is appropriate.

× No, I didn't have the experience by using PayPal to make an aircraft. I just have the experience by using the plastic to make a craft in primary school.

✓ No, I didn't have experience using PayPal to make an aircraft. I only have experience using plastic to make a craft in primary school.

After experience, the -ing form can directly describe the activity: experience using something. The preposition by is unnecessary here.

× In my childhood I will use paper to draw some pictures.

✓ In my childhood, I used paper to draw some pictures.

The phrase in my childhood refers to a completed period in the past, so the simple past used is required instead of the future form will use.

× Write some notes and other.

✓ I used paper to write some notes and other things.

Write some notes and other is a sentence fragment because it has no subject and finite verb. It should be joined to the previous sentence, and other must be followed by a noun such as things.

× This is because paper can use to wrote many things.

✓ This is because paper can be used to write many things.

Paper receives the action, so the passive form can be used is required. After the modal verb can, use the base form be, and after to, use write rather than the past-tense form wrote.

× No, I didn't write physical letters.

✓ No, I don't write physical letters.

The question asks about a current habit, so the simple present don't write is more suitable than the simple past didn't write.

× Nowadays many people are using e-mail to write letters and send it to other people, so this is also a type of recycle.

✓ Nowadays, many people use email to write letters and send them to other people, so this is also a type of recycling.

Them must refer to the plural noun letters. The singular pronoun it cannot refer to letters. Recycling is the noun or gerund form needed after a type of.

× Yes, I especially the old generation people because the handwritten letters that they kept is their memories and contact to each other in their generation.

✓ Yes, I especially mean older people, because the handwritten letters they keep are their memories and a way to stay in contact with each other.

The original sentence lacks a main verb after I. Adding mean creates a complete clause. The relative clause does not need that because letters they keep is sufficient here.

× Yes, I especially the old generation people because the handwritten letters that they kept is their memories and contact to each other in their generation.

✓ Yes, I especially mean older people, because the handwritten letters they keep are their memories and a way to stay in contact with each other.

The subject letters is plural, so the verb must be are, not is. Plural subjects require plural forms of be.

× Yes, I especially the old generation people because the handwritten letters that they kept is their memories and contact to each other in their generation.

✓ Yes, I especially mean older people, because the handwritten letters they keep are their memories and a way to stay in contact with each other.

The question asks what people keep today, so the present-tense form keep is more appropriate than the past-tense form kept.

× Yes, I especially the old generation people because the handwritten letters that they kept is their memories and contact to each other in their generation.

✓ Yes, I especially mean older people, because the handwritten letters they keep are their memories and a way to stay in contact with each other.

The correct expression is stay in contact with someone, not contact to someone. The prepositions in and with are fixed parts of this expression.

× No, I will not carry paper and pens when I go out because nowadays we have phone or iPad it is very easier to bring out.

✓ No, I don't carry paper and pens when I go out because nowadays we have a phone or an iPad, which is much easier to carry.

The question asks about a current habit, so don't carry is better than will not carry. The clause also needs articles before singular countable nouns, and which provides a grammatical link to the following clause.

× No, I will not carry paper and pens when I go out because nowadays we have phone or iPad it is very easier to bring out.

✓ No, I don't carry paper and pens when I go out because nowadays we have a phone or an iPad, which is much easier to carry.

Phone and iPad are singular countable nouns, so they need articles. Use a before the consonant sound in phone and an before the vowel sound in iPad.

× No, I will not carry paper and pens when I go out because nowadays we have phone or iPad it is very easier to bring out.

✓ No, I don't carry paper and pens when I go out because nowadays we have a phone or an iPad, which is much easier to carry.

Easier is already a comparative adjective, so it cannot be modified by very. Use much easier when making a comparison.

× This is because phone can help us to write notes and set it as a reminder so we will not remember.

✓ This is because a phone can help us write notes and set it as a reminder, so we will not forget.

The pronoun it should clearly refer to the phone, not to notes. The corrected sentence makes the reference clear. Forget is also the appropriate verb for the intended meaning.