纸— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp; nêu một câu chủ đề rồi bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể, dùng liên từ để mạch lạc. Ví dụ: giải thích rõ loại đồ thủ công, nguyên liệu và cảm xúc khi làm. Tránh những từ không chính xác như “hard coin and cream and start”.

範例: Yes, I used to make paper crafts when I was a child. I often made paper animals and simple origami using colored paper and glue. I enjoyed it because it was fun and let me be creative, and I sometimes gave my creations to friends.

建議: Cần trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề đúng thì và sửa lỗi phát âm/ từ sai; mô tả cụ thể các bước, nguyên liệu và cảm giác. Dùng liên từ như “and” hoặc “so” hợp lý, và giới hạn tối đa 4-5 câu.

範例: I liked making paper stars as a child. I would cut strips of colored paper and fold them carefully into star shapes. My family and I decorated them with glitter, so they looked bright and festive. I loved doing this because it was relaxing and made our home cheerful.

建議: Cần dùng thì đúng (present perfect vs. simple), câu chủ đề rõ ràng, và giải thích lý do cụ thể. Tránh lặp từ và tiếng ồ ạt. Có thể đưa ra ví dụ ngắn về khi nào bạn sẽ viết thư tay.

範例: Not usually. I rarely write physical letters now because I can contact people instantly through social media and messaging apps. I might write a handwritten note only for special occasions like a birthday or a thank-you card.

建議: Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, có cấu trúc luận điểm + lý do + ví dụ; tránh những từ mập mờ như “a little bit”. Nên dùng liên từ như “however”/“but” để đối chiếu, và đề cập đến nhóm người cụ thể (ví dụ: older people).

範例: Yes, some people still keep handwritten letters, especially older generations who value them as memories. However, younger people tend to prefer digital messages because they are faster and easier to store. So while letters are less common, they remain meaningful for certain people.

建議: Trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên, tránh lặp từ (“really, really”) và lỗi ngữ pháp; dùng tối đa 4 câu: câu chủ đề + hai chi tiết cụ thể (khi nào, cái gì). Có thể nêu lợi ích cụ thể của việc mang đồ viết.

範例: Yes, I always carry a small notebook and a few pens when I go out. I often use them to jot down ideas, take notes while studying, or record important information. Having them helps me stay organized and prepared.

× Yes, I used to make craft with paper in my childhood.

✓ Yes, I used to make crafts with paper in my childhood.

The noun 'craft' should be plural 'crafts' when referring to various handmade items. Use plural for countable nouns when speaking generally about multiple items.'

× Children very like to do something from paper.

✓ Children really like to make things out of paper.

'Very like' is not correct English; use the adverb 'really' before 'like'. Also 'do something from paper' is unnatural; use 'make things out of paper' for activities using paper.'

× You need to make a hard coin and cream and start.

✓ You need to use a hard coin and cream and start.

The sentence is unclear and likely misuses words. 'Make a hard coin' is ungrammatical; perhaps 'use a hard coin' is intended. Clarify meaning: if referring to pressing folds, say 'You need a hard coin and glue to start.' Replace incorrect verbs and nouns to match intended action.'

× I like to make a start star.

✓ I liked to make a star.

The context is childhood (past), so use past tense 'liked'. 'Start star' is a misspelling or wrong word; correct to 'star'.'

× we used to cut the paper into a stray, then we fold it into the start and we have a lot of colorful vapor, so the star is colorful.

✓ We used to cut the paper into a strip, then fold it into a star, and we had a lot of colorful paper, so the star was colorful.

Multiple word choice and tense issues: 'stray' should be 'strip'; 'fold it into the start' -> 'fold it into a star'; 'vapor' is wrong, likely 'paper'; maintain past tense 'had'/'was' for childhood actions.'

× Actually, I haven't write written physical letter anymore because we can communicate, we can chat from uh on social media.

✓ Actually, I haven't written physical letters anymore because we can communicate and chat on social media.

Use present perfect 'haven't written' (past participle 'written'), plural 'letters' for general reference, and remove redundant words. 'Chat on social media' is natural phrasing.'

× So write physical letter, it's hard for me.

✓ So writing physical letters is hard for me.

Use gerund 'writing' to act as a noun. Plural 'letters' for general reference. Combine into clear sentence without 'it's' redundancy.'

× I think somewhere, uh, still have some people who keep handwriting letter today, but it's a little bit.

✓ I think somewhere there are still some people who keep handwritten letters today, but not many.

Add subject 'there are' for 'there be' structure, use 'handwritten letters' (adjective + plural noun), and replace vague 'it's a little bit' with 'not many' to express small number.'

× For young people, I think they don't use handwriting letter, they use social media instead of.

✓ For young people, I think they don't use handwritten letters; they use social media instead.

Use adjective 'handwritten' and plural 'letters'. 'Instead of' requires an object; use 'instead' to end the clause. Maintain present simple for habitual actions.'

× Yes, of course. I usually go out to, uh, walk or study, so I need paper and pens to help me write something important.

✓ Yes, of course. I usually go out to walk or study, so I need paper and pens to help me write important things.

Minor wording: 'write something important' is acceptable but 'write important things' sounds more natural. Remove filler 'uh' and keep parallel structure.'

× It's really, really necessary for me. I have one paper notebook and a lot of pens.

✓ It's really necessary for me. I have a paper notebook and a lot of pens.

Remove redundant repetition 'really, really'. 'One paper notebook' is grammatical but 'a paper notebook' is more natural; content already definite by context.'

× It's colorful color.

✓ It is colorful.

'Colorful color' is redundant and ungrammatical; use the adjective 'colorful' to describe the item.'