纸— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 表达要更自然且语法正确。回答要先一句概括性的主题句，然后用一两句具体细节支持，避免重复词。注意时态一致和单复数、冠词等小错误。可以加连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: Yes, I used to make paper airplanes when I was young. I enjoyed folding different designs and testing which one flew the farthest. Because I was interested in aircraft, I often adjusted the wings to improve stability.

建議: 回答需更连贯并具体说明做什么、怎样做以及带来的感受。避免错误搭配（如 'creative tips'）并使用连词连接句子。控制句子数量在3-4句以内。

範例: As a child I loved making paper models, especially airplanes and small boxes. Folding and decorating them helped me practise creativity and fine motor skills. It was great fun because I could play with my creations and share them with friends.

建議: 答案要直接回应问题且语法正确。说明原因时用清晰的连接词并给出具体情况或频率。注意主谓一致与介词用法。

範例: To be honest, I rarely write physical letters nowadays. With social media and email it is much faster to communicate, so I usually send emails or messages instead.

建議: 回答需要更准确的词汇与结构。使用更恰当的表达（例如 'older people'、'pen pals'），并用连接词说明原因和例子。避免拼写和语法错误。

範例: Yes, some people still keep handwritten letters, especially older generations. For example, elderly people who are less familiar with smartphones may prefer writing letters, and some people still exchange letters with pen pals.

建議: 回答要更简洁并注意语法（复数、冠词和时态）。给出具体场景说明用途并使用连接词提高连贯性。避免重复短语。

範例: Yes, I usually carry a pen and a small notebook when I go out. They are convenient for jotting down important information, such as ideas or notes during a lecture.

× Of course I made a paper airplane and make it fly in the sky because I am interested in the airplane. So aircraft airplane.

✓ Of course I made a paper airplane and made it fly in the sky because I am interested in airplanes.

句中时态应保持一致，主句用了过去式“made”，后面并列动词也应使用过去式或动名词形式。原句使用了“make”与前文不一致。此外“the airplane. So aircraft airplane.” 表达重复且不自然，应改为复数“airplanes”或泛指“airplanes”。建议将并列动词改为与主句一致的过去式，并使用恰当的名词形式。

× When I was a child I made a craft with papers.

✓ When I was a child I made crafts with paper.

“paper”作不可数名词时通常不用复数“papers”；而“a craft”指单一工艺，若想表达多次制作应使用复数“crafts”。根据语境改为“made crafts with paper”。

× It can improve my creative tips, especially to make some airplanes or box waste paper.

✓ It helped improve my creativity, especially when making airplanes or small paper boxes from waste paper.

原句中“creative tips”用词不当，应为“creativity”。动词结构也应改为动名词“making”。“box waste paper”词序和搭配错误，应改为“small paper boxes from waste paper”。此外时态应与前句过去时一致。

× It makes me a lot of fun.

✓ It was a lot of fun for me.

原句“This makes me a lot of fun”结构不正确，英语中应说“be fun”且与过去时匹配，改为“It was a lot of fun for me.” 更自然。

× To be honest not great because now they is a social technology.

✓ To be honest, not really — nowadays there is social technology.

原句结构不完整且时态与主语不匹配。“they is”主谓不一致，应为“there is”表示存在。“now”常用“nowadays”表示当前普遍现象。建议补全句子主语与谓语并使用正确的存在结构。

× So I prefer send an email instead of the paper letters.

✓ So I prefer to send an email instead of paper letters.

“prefer”后应加不定式“to send”或动名词“sending”。“the paper letters”中文语境为泛指，应去掉定冠词“the”。因此改为“prefer to send an email instead of paper letters.”

× I think some of people still keep handwriting letters for example some old person are not good at to use the smartphone, so they prefer to hand write letters and communicate with their pen pills.

✓ I think some people still keep handwritten letters. For example, some older people are not good at using smartphones, so they prefer to handwrite letters and communicate with pen and paper.

原句有多处代词和名词错误。“some of people”应为“some people”或“some of the people”。“handwriting letters”应为“handwritten letters”。“some old person are”主谓不一致且单复数错误，应为“some older people are”。“not good at to use”用法错误，应用动名词“using”。“hand write”应合写为“handwrite”。“pen pills”显然为拼写或词汇错误，应为“pen and paper”。

× Of course when I come out I usually take pen and papers because I think pen and papers are convenient to record some important information.

✓ Of course when I go out I usually take a pen and some paper because I think a pen and paper are convenient for recording important information.

“come out”在此处应为“go out”。“pen and papers”数量和冠词使用不当，应为“a pen and some paper”或“pen and paper”。“convenient to record”搭配不自然，常用“convenient for recording”。保持主谓一致并修正冠词与不可数名词用法。

× For example when your class I prefer record some notes by the pen and paper.

✓ For example, when in class I prefer to record some notes with a pen and paper.

句子结构不完整，“when your class”应为“when in class”或“during class”。“prefer record”需加不定式“to record”。介词搭配应为“with a pen and paper”。时态与习惯性现在时一致。