纸— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答需要更自然且语法准确。注意时态一致（过去时和现在时），减少冗余并用一到两句补充细节。可以用连接词来组织句子。比如先说过去常做的事，再说明现在是否还做。

範例: Yes, I made a lot of paper crafts when I was in primary school because we had art lessons and a teacher who showed us how to fold and decorate paper. Nowadays I rarely make them, but I still enjoy simple origami occasionally.

建議: 句子结构混乱且不完整，词汇使用不准确（如"split it"不明确）。回答应有主题句并提供具体例子，使用连接词使内容连贯。并确保句子完整且不超过5句。

範例: As a child I mostly enjoyed drawing on paper and making simple paper crafts like paper boats and folded animals. I also liked cutting coloured paper to create collages and stickers for my notebooks.

建議: 总体清晰但有语法小错误和重复（"was more it is more"）。可改用更地道表达并补充一两个原因或例子以丰富内容。

範例: No, I rarely write physical letters nowadays because messaging apps like WeChat and QQ are much more convenient. For example, I can send photos and voice messages instantly, which makes chatting faster than writing letters.

建議: 回答观点明确但用词可更自然（如"hand letters"应为"handwritten letters"）。建议给出具体例子或场景，并用连接词增强逻辑。

範例: Yes, some people still keep handwritten letters, especially for sentimental reasons. For instance, couples and older relatives often save letters as keepsakes because they feel more personal than digital messages.

建議: 回答表意清楚但有语法错误和未完成句子（末尾中断）。应避免非正式短语（"I like to say no"），并补充完整结论或例子。用一到两句说明为何只带手机，以及是否有例外。

範例: No, I usually don't carry paper and pens; I just take my phone because I can take notes, message people and shop online with it. Occasionally I bring a small notebook when I know I'll need to sketch or write long notes.

× Yes, I had, especially when I was in primary school.

✓ Yes, I did, especially when I was in primary school.

句子意图回答“Have you made any crafts with paper?”使用現在完成或一般過去時更合適。原句用“I had”不符合英語中對過去經驗問句的回答習慣，應用助動詞“did”來回應一般疑問句的過去經驗，或用“I have”表示經驗。建議：對“have you...?”類問題，若指過去某時，可用“I did”；若指至今的經驗，用“I have”.（簡體）

× We had art classes and our teacher usually taught us how to make a make some crafts.

✓ We had art classes and our teacher usually taught us how to make some crafts.

原句出現重複“make a make some crafts”，是詞語重複錯誤，屬於句子結構/措辭問題，但根據可接受類型，需刪除多餘部分。建議：寫句子前檢查是否有重複片語，確保只保留一個短語。（簡體）

× I like doing this very much. And when I get older it doesn't I doesn't often do this.

✓ I like doing this very much. And when I get older I don't often do this.

原句出現“doesn't I doesn't”語序混亂且人稱不一致。描述自己使用第一人稱時應用助動詞“do”而不是“does”。此外，時態應一致：用一般現在描述習慣。建議：第一人稱單數用“I don't ...”而第三人稱單數才用“doesn't ...”。（簡體）

× I think the most things I do paper is draw on paper and then I do some paper crafts and also I like to split it and

✓ I think the main things I did with paper were drawing on it, making some paper crafts, and also tearing it.

原句語序混亂、時態不一致且結尾不完整。問題包含主語與動詞搭配不當以及不完整並列結構。根據語境談兒時愛好，應用過去時或描述習慣的過去表達，並把動作並列完整。建議：把動詞轉為過去式或使用不定式/動名詞一致，並完成句子結尾。（簡體）

× No, I don't write physical letters anymore because we have more convenient tools to send messages to our friends such as we Chat and QQ in China.

✓ No, I don't write physical letters anymore because we have more convenient tools to send messages to our friends, such as WeChat and QQ in China.

主要錯誤是專有名詞拼寫（WeChat）和標點及詞序，且“we Chat”拼寫不正確。這屬於詞形/拼寫與句子流暢性問題，但根據列表最接近的是現在時使用（描述現在習慣），所以保留一般現在時並修正專有名詞。建議：專有名詞注意大小寫與正確拼寫，並用逗號分隔舉例。（簡體）

× And it was more it is more convenient and I can text any time.

✓ And it is more convenient and I can text at any time.

原句“was more it is more”混合了過去和現在時，且缺少介詞“at”。描述當前情況應使用一般現在時“is”。建議：描述現在事實用現在時，並用固定搭配“text at any time”。（簡體）

× Of course, there will also remain some people who write hand letters because maybe it's their tradition and some couples like to write them to show the love to the other.

✓ Of course, there will still be some people who write handwritten letters because maybe it's their tradition, and some couples like to write them to show love to each other.

原句問題包括時態/語序和詞語搭配：應用“there will still be”或直接用現在時“there are still”，但原句“remain”搭配不自然；“hand letters”應為“handwritten letters”或“handwritten notes”；“show the love to the other”應為“show love to each other”。建議：使用自然搭配“handwritten letters”與“each other”，並選擇一致時態（現在或未來）。（簡體）

× I like to say no. I only take my phone when I go out because it's more convenient and I almost can do everything on the phone, such as taking notes, sending messages and even shopping.

✓ I'd say no. I only take my phone when I go out because it's more convenient and I can do almost everything on the phone, such as taking notes, sending messages and even shopping.

原句“I like to say no”用法不自然，應為“I'd say no”或“I would say no”。此外“I almost can do everything”詞序不當，應為“can do almost everything”。建議：使用固定短語“I'd say...”來表達意見，並注意副詞“almost”的正確位置。（簡體）

× And I think almost everyone don't

✓ And I think almost everyone doesn't.

主語“everyone”為單數不定代詞，須與單數動詞一致，應用“doesn't”而不是“don't”。原句還不完整，需要補全語句，如“doesn't carry paper and pens”。建議：注意不定代詞（everyone, someone等）後用單數動詞，並補全句子以完成表達。（簡體）