服装— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the response more natural, concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Avoid filler sounds (uh) and past tense errors. Use linking words if adding detail (for example, because, since).

範例: I prefer wearing polo shirts because they look smart and are comfortable. For example, in college we used departmental polo shirts, so I became used to their neat appearance and ease of wear.

建議: Give a direct topic sentence and one clear reason with correct grammar. Remove repetition and filler words. Use a linking word (because) to connect reason to preference and choose precise vocabulary (comfortable, relaxed).

範例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they help me relax and avoid irritation. For instance, loose cotton shirts let my skin breathe during long days.

建議: Answer directly and then provide one or two specific contexts where you wear T-shirts. Ensure sentences are complete and coherent. Use linking words (for example, when) to connect ideas and avoid fragmented phrases.

範例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. For example, I usually wear them for casual outings like shopping, day trips, or when I go to school because they are comfortable and easy to match.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence about how much time you spend, then explain why with specific detail (variety, budget). Avoid trailing off; finish your thought. Use linking words such as because or so.

範例: Yes, I spend quite a bit of time choosing clothes because there are many options and I have a limited budget, so I take time to find good value. For example, I compare styles and prices for at least 30 minutes before buying.

建議: Provide a clear conditional statement and specific examples for weekdays and weekends. Use correct vocabulary (workday, weekend, formal, casual) and avoid hesitation. Keep to two or three sentences maximum.

範例: It depends. On weekdays I usually wear formal shirts for work or university, but on weekends I prefer casual clothes or home wear, such as sweatpants and T-shirts, to relax.

建議: State your favourite color clearly, then give one or two concise, specific reasons. Avoid repetition and awkward phrasing. Use vocabulary like calm, relaxed, and add a brief example of items you like in that colour.

範例: My favourite colour is blue because it makes me feel calm and relaxed and looks clean and fresh. For example, I often choose blue shirts and jackets because they suit many occasions and match easily.

× I like polo shirt because it's, uh, looks formal.

✓ I like polo shirts because they look formal.

The student omitted the plural marker and used incorrect article. 'Polo shirt' should be plural 'polo shirts' when speaking generally (or 'a polo shirt' for one). Also 'it's, uh, looks' is incorrect; use plural pronoun 'they' to match plural noun and the base verb 'look'. Fixing article/plural and subject-verb agreement corrects the sentence.

× And when I was a college that polo shirt is our type of departmental shirts.

✓ When I was in college, those polo shirts were our departmental shirts.

Errors: missing preposition 'in' before 'college' and wrong demonstrative and number agreement. 'That polo shirt is our type of departmental shirts' mixes singular and plural. Use 'those polo shirts' and past tense 'were' because the time reference is past ('when I was in college'). This corrects preposition, number agreement, and tense.

× Comfortable clothes I must I like most preferable wear because it it helps my body to stay not irritable and I feel relaxed.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes most of the time because they help my body stay comfortable and relaxed.

Problems: awkward quantifier and word order. 'I must I like most preferable wear' is ungrammatical. Use 'I prefer to wear... most of the time' to express preference. Also use plural pronoun 'they' for 'clothes' and correct verb 'help' (not 'helps'). 'Not irritable' is unnatural; use 'comfortable' or 'relaxed'.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. When it comes, I go to the. Some tour and also like going to shopping and also going to school.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. I wear them when I go on tours, when I go shopping, and when I go to school.

Original has fragmented sentences and missing objects. 'When it comes, I go to the.' is incomplete. Clarify with 'I wear them when I go on tours, when I go shopping, and when I go to school.' This fixes sentence structure and adds appropriate prepositions.

× Yes, I spend lot of time and also hours because when I go to shopping there's a lot of different shirts I like but my money is only limited on budget so I prefer to uh, select one which.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time and hours choosing because when I go shopping there are many different shirts I like, but my budget is limited so I prefer to choose only one.

Errors: missing article in 'a lot', incorrect preposition 'go to shopping' should be 'go shopping', wrong verb forms and awkward ending. Use 'there are' for existence and 'many' for countable plural 'shirts'. 'Limited on budget' should be 'my budget is limited'. Finish the clause with 'choose only one.'

× It depends on it, when I have a go old sound I most preferable umm formal shirt and if I have in only on my home IU usually home clothes only to suit.

✓ It depends. When I have to go out, I prefer a formal shirt, and when I am at home I usually wear casual home clothes.

Many pronoun and phrase errors: 'It depends on it' is redundant. 'When I have a go old sound' is unintelligible—interpreted as 'when I have to go out'. 'Most preferable' is wrong; use 'prefer'. 'If I have in only on my home IU' corrected to 'when I am at home'. Fix verb forms and word order.

× My favorite color is blue because it gives me a purity in cleanliness which me which makes me feel calm and relaxed.

✓ My favorite color is blue because it gives me a sense of purity and cleanliness, which makes me feel calm and relaxed.

Awkward phrases: 'gives me a purity in cleanliness' is unidiomatic. Use 'a sense of purity and cleanliness'. Remove redundant words 'which me which'. Ensure relative clause 'which makes me feel...' refers clearly to the preceding noun phrase.

× It purities of cleanliness and also of royalty.

✓ It suggests purity, cleanliness, and a sense of royalty.

'It purities of cleanliness' is grammatically incorrect; 'purity' is a noun and 'purities' is not appropriate here. Use 'suggests' or 'conveys' plus a list of nouns: 'purity, cleanliness, and a sense of royalty.' This corrects word choice and noun forms.