服装— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be clearer and more grammatical. Start with a concise topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh), and give one or two specific reasons. Use linking words like ‘because’ or ‘so’ correctly.

範例: I prefer to wear baggy clothes that fit me well. I usually choose black and white because they are easy to match and look neat, so I feel comfortable and confident.

建議: Organize your answer: state your preference, then give two clear reasons with correct grammar. Avoid confusion and unnecessary phrases.

範例: I prefer comfortable clothes. Because they let me move easily for different activities, and I don’t have to spend time adjusting my outfit after work, so I can relax more.

建議: Provide a clear yes/no topic sentence, then explain why with specific details. Use correct verb forms and remove unclear phrases like ‘little one’.

範例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. The weather here is hot, so T-shirts keep me cool and comfortable, and they give me a casual, relaxed look.

建議: Make your reason clear and specific. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Say what ‘unique’ means and give an example of what you look for.

範例: Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I look for unique items. For example, I often search for unusual patterns or specific brands, so I compare many options before I buy.

建議: Give a clear contrast: state the weekday style, then weekend style, and give specific examples. Correct vocabulary (e.g. ‘uniform’ not ‘quotes’) and reduce repetition.

範例: Yes. On weekdays I wear formal clothes, usually my work uniform — white coat and a scarf at the hospital. On weekends I wear casual, comfortable clothes like jeans and T-shirts.

建議: Answer directly and explain with clear, specific reasons. Avoid repetitive phrases and contradictory statements. Say why black and white appeal to you.

範例: I prefer black and white clothes because they are easy to find and match. They also look professional and simple, so I can wear them for many occasions.

× I like to wear baggy, uh, clothes and that fit with me and, uh, colours will be, uh, black, black and white, uh, because in my thought that's colour with the perfect for me.

✓ I like to wear baggy clothes that fit me, and the colours will be black and white because, in my opinion, those colours are perfect for me.

Errors: incorrect preposition use ('fit with me' should be 'fit me'), unnecessary words ('uh'), wrong determiner and article use ('that's colour with the perfect' is ungrammatical). Suggestion: use 'fit me' for clothing, use 'in my opinion' for expressing views, and plural 'those colours' to refer to two colours. Also simplify sentence by removing filler words and redundant phrases.

× I like to wear comfortable clothes because when I wear the clothes that I feel I good or comfort, I can do different activities and I could not spend night time and managing my wearing clothes behind the work.

✓ I like to wear comfortable clothes because when I wear clothes that make me feel good and comfortable, I can do different activities and I don't have to spend time managing my clothes after work.

Errors: tense and verb form ('I feel I good' should be 'make me feel good'), modal/auxiliary misuse ('I could not spend night time' incorrect meaning). Suggestion: use present simple for habitual reasons, 'make me feel' for cause, and 'don't have to' to express lack of necessity. Replace 'night time' with 'after work' for intended meaning.

× Just iron then wearing T-shirt because the temperature in the area where I live is hot and so I feel comfortable and little one while wearing the T-shirt.

✓ I just iron my T-shirts because the temperature where I live is hot, so I feel comfortable and a bit cooler when wearing a T-shirt.

Errors: incorrect verb form sequence ('Just iron then wearing' should be 'I just iron my T-shirts'), wrong adjective use ('little one' unclear, use 'a bit cooler'). Suggestion: use subject-verb structure 'I iron my T-shirts', plural for general habit, and 'when wearing' or 'when I wear' to indicate condition.

× It's also makes me casual.

✓ It also makes me look casual.

Errors: subject-verb agreement and verb choice ('It's also makes' incorrect; use 'It also makes' or 'It makes me' but here 'It makes me look casual' is natural). Suggestion: remove contraction mismatch and use 'look' to describe appearance.

× Yes, I am take a lot of time when I go for shopping because I only like the unique protest which is found impossible on on thought so I.

✓ Yes, I take a long time when I go shopping because I only like unique items, which are often hard to find.

Errors: incorrect auxiliary use ('I am take'), wrong noun and word choice ('protest' wrong for 'product' or 'pieces'), repetition ('on on thought so I'), and unclear clause structure. Suggestion: use 'I take a long time' for duration, 'go shopping' without 'for', 'unique items' for desired objects, and 'hard to find' to express difficulty.

× Yes, I wear different types of clotase during the weekdays or weekends. On weekdays I usually wear the formal quotes or we we can say address of the medical staff. That's scarf and white suits. However, in weekends I usually wear my comfortable clothes.

✓ Yes, I wear different types of clothes on weekdays and at weekends. On weekdays I usually wear formal clothes or a uniform for medical staff, such as a scarf and white suit. However, on weekends I usually wear comfortable clothes.

Errors: preposition choice ('during the weekdays or weekends' should be 'on weekdays and at weekends'), misspellings ('clotase' -> 'clothes', 'quotes' unclear), article and noun agreement ('white suits' -> 'white suit' or 'white suits' depending; using singular 'a uniform' then example). Suggestion: use 'on' with days, 'on weekends' or 'at weekends', and clarify with 'such as' when giving examples.

× I usually wear the black and white clothes because they can be found easily easily in the market. Most of the clothes on those two clothes are formal and unique with needs of this specific design without any specific designs.

✓ I usually wear black and white clothes because they can be found easily in the market. Most clothes in these colours are formal and have simple designs without any specific patterns.

Errors: incorrect articles and quantifiers ('the black and white clothes' unnecessary 'the'), repetition ('easily easily'), and confusing phrasing ('on those two clothes', 'unique with needs of this specific design without any specific designs'). Suggestion: use 'black and white clothes' generally, 'most clothes in these colours', and 'simple designs' to express lack of decorative patterns.