服装— Part 1 評分報告

× I want to **** a teacher and wear some some bigotry to **** them like I one day to **** with me too.

✓ I want to become a teacher and wear some clothing to teach them, and I want them to join me one day.

The original sentence has multiple structural problems: missing verbs, repetition ('some some'), incorrect word choice ('bigotry' is wrong), and unclear clause connections. Rearrange into clear subject-verb-object phrases and use appropriate vocabulary. Use 'become' for wanting to be a profession, 'clothing' for clothes, and separate ideas with conjunctions. Suggested improvement: break complex ideas into simple clauses, ensure each clause has a subject and verb, and choose correct nouns.

× **** no.

✓ No, I don't.

The original reply is incomplete and uses slang. For a polite negative response use a complete clause with auxiliary verb: 'I don't' or 'No, I don't.' This provides a clear subject and verb. Suggested improvement: include subject and auxiliary/modal where necessary for full sentences.

× Hell no, I don't like the ******* T-shirts look.

✓ Hell no, I don't like the T-shirt look.

'T-shirts' as a plural noun with 'look' (singular) is awkward; 'the T-shirt look' is the usual phrase. Also avoid unnecessary pluralization when referring to a style. Ensure noun forms match the intended phrase. Suggested improvement: use standard collocations like 'the T-shirt look' or 'T-shirts' with appropriate verbs.

× It look ugly as ****.

✓ It looks ugly as ****.

Third person singular subject 'it' requires the verb 'look' to be in third person singular form 'looks'. Ensure verb agrees with subject. Suggested improvement: add 's' for present simple with he/she/it subjects.

× Hmm, not really tall.

✓ Hmm, not really.

'Tall' is unrelated to the question about wearing different styles; it creates a nonsensical phrase. Likely the student intended to say 'not really.' Remove the incorrect adjective. Suggested improvement: answer questions directly and avoid irrelevant adjectives.

× I wear the same clothes all the week.

✓ I wear the same clothes all week.

Use the idiomatic expression 'all week' instead of 'all the week.' 'All the week' is nonstandard in this context. Suggested improvement: learn common time expressions: 'all week', 'every day', 'during the week'.

× I don't like to take a bath and usually when choosing clothes I'm busy ******* with my girlfriend.

✓ I don't like taking a bath, and usually when choosing clothes I'm busy hanging out with my girlfriend.

Use gerund 'taking' after 'don't like' rather than infinitive for habitual dislike. Replace censored or unclear verb with appropriate action such as 'hanging out'. Ensure parallel structure with 'and'. Suggested improvement: after 'like' use '-ing' for general preferences; choose clear verbs for activities.

× So yeah, I'm not choosing anything.

✓ So yeah, I don't choose anything.

For habitual actions use simple present 'I don't choose' rather than present continuous 'I'm not choosing', which suggests a temporary action. The student describes a general habit. Suggested improvement: use simple present for routines and habits.

× Well, I like every color.

✓ Well, I like every color.

This sentence is grammatically correct as a response; no change needed. It appropriately uses simple present to express general preference. Suggested improvement: none.

× Red, blue, black, green, yellow, brown, pink, purple, blah, blah blah blah blah blah blah.

✓ I like red, blue, black, green, yellow, brown, pink, and purple.

Replace filler 'blah' with a concise list and include 'and' before the final item for correct list structure. Avoid filler words in formal responses. Suggested improvement: present examples succinctly and finish the list properly.