服装— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix verb/subject agreement and word choice (e.g., "It makes me feel..." not "It make").

範例: I prefer casual clothes, such as jeans and T-shirts, because they are comfortable and practical. For example, when I go out with family or friends I can move easily and feel relaxed.

建議: Organize the answer with a clear topic sentence and two concise, grammatically correct reasons. Use linking phrases (firstly, secondly) correctly and avoid unclear phrasing (e.g., "I don't think my I have a good figure"). Offer one brief example if possible.

範例: I prefer casual clothes for two reasons. Firstly, they make me feel comfortable and relaxed most of the time. Secondly, I don't feel confident in smart clothes because they draw attention to my figure, so I usually choose casual outfits.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence then one or two specific supporting points. Use correct grammar and linking words (for example, "because" or "also") and avoid awkward phrasing (e.g., "to make me relax"). Mention a brief example of a T-shirt you like.

範例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are casual and comfortable. Also, some T-shirts have slogans or designs that express my personality, for example a music band T-shirt I wear often.

建議: Answer directly and add one concise reason with correct phrasing. Avoid repetition and fix grammar ("as as long as it's possible" unclear). You can give a short example of how you shop to support the answer.

範例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I dislike shopping. I usually buy only what I need, for example a pair of jeans when my old ones wear out.

建議: Make the contrast clear with correct word choice and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific example of weekday vs weekend outfits and a brief reason for the difference.

範例: Yes. On weekdays I wear more ordinary clothes like shirts and trousers for work or school, but on weekends I usually wear very casual outfits, such as T-shirts and jeans, because I want to relax.

建議: Be precise and use appropriate vocabulary. "Spiritual" is not the right word here; use phrases like "brighter" or "more radiant". Provide a clear topic sentence and a short reason with correct grammar and a brief example of an outfit.

範例: I prefer light colours like white and pink because they make my skin tone look brighter. For instance, I often wear a white shirt when I want to look fresher.

× I prefer to wear casual clothes like jeans and T-shirts because I find this kind of clothes is very comfortable and especially when I go out with my family or friends, I'd like to wear this kind of clothes.

✓ I prefer to wear casual clothes like jeans and T-shirts because I find these kinds of clothes very comfortable, and especially when I go out with my family or friends, I'd like to wear them.

The sentence uses 'this kind of clothes' which mixes singular demonstrative with plural noun and repeats awkwardly. Replace with 'these kinds of clothes' or 'these clothes' and use the pronoun 'them' to refer back. Also remove the extra 'is' and combine clauses with a comma and conjunction for fluency.

× It make me feel comfortable and practical.

✓ They make me feel comfortable and practical.

'It' does not agree with plural subject 'clothes'; use 'they' and the plural verb 'make'. Ensure subject-verb agreement: plural subject requires plural pronoun and verb.

× Easy move.

✓ They allow me to move easily.

Fragment 'Easy move.' lacks a subject and verb. Recast as a full sentence that fits context: 'They allow me to move easily.' This expresses the intended meaning with correct word order and grammatical elements.

× Firstly I like to be comfortable and relaxed at the most of time and secondly I don't think my I have a good figure so I don't think I look smart even in some smart.

✓ Firstly, I like to be comfortable and relaxed most of the time, and secondly, I don't think I have a good figure, so I don't think I look smart even in smart clothes.

Multiple errors: 'at the most of time' is incorrect — use 'most of the time'; remove extra 'my' before 'I'; 'even in some smart' is incomplete — add 'clothes'. Also add commas for clarity and keep present tense consistent.

× It's because T-shirt is very casual and practical and to make me relax, make me comfortable and sometimes there are words on the T-shirt which can represent my personality.

✓ It's because a T-shirt is very casual and practical and makes me relax and feel comfortable, and sometimes there are words on a T-shirt that can represent my personality.

Use the indefinite article 'a' before 'T-shirt' when speaking generally. Use 'makes me relax and feel comfortable' with correct verb form and parallel structure. Replace 'which' with 'that' for defining clause and keep article consistent.

× No, actually I don't like shopping for clothes so I don't spend too much time on it. I just purchase what I need and that's all. I don't like to get new ones as as long as it's possible.

✓ No, actually I don't like shopping for clothes so I don't spend too much time on it. I just buy what I need and that's all. I don't like to get new ones as long as possible.

Prefer 'buy' to 'purchase' for conversational tone but both are grammatical. Remove duplicate 'as' and rephrase 'as long as it's possible' to 'as long as possible' for natural expression. Maintain present tense.

× Yes, on what days I will try to wear something feel more normal, but in weekends I will wear something very casual like T-shirts and jeans.

✓ Yes, on weekdays I try to wear something that feels more normal, but on weekends I wear something very casual like T-shirts and jeans.

'On what days' is incorrect — use 'on weekdays'. Use present simple 'I try' and 'I wear' for habitual actions instead of future 'will'. Add 'that' and correct verb 'feels' to agree with singular 'something'. Use 'on weekends' not 'in weekends'.

× I prefer the light color clothes such as white or pink because I think my skin is a little dark so the light color clothes can make me look more spiritual.

✓ I prefer light-colored clothes such as white or pink because I think my skin is a little dark, so light colors can make me look brighter.

Use adjective form 'light-colored' or compound 'light colored' and plural 'colors'. 'Make me look more spiritual' is unnatural; 'brighter' conveys the intended visual effect. Also remove extra 'the' and add comma for clarity.