服装— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. "I prefer wearing white and pink clothes."), then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (e.g. "because" or "so"). Avoid repetition and incomplete phrases. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

範例: I prefer wearing white and pink clothes because they make me feel fresh and cheerful. For example, a white dress helps me look clean and bright, while pink gives a soft, feminine touch.

建議: Answer directly and avoid repeating the same words. Give one clear reason and a short example. Use linking words like "because" and "for example." Keep sentences simple and grammatical (subject-verb agreement).

範例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they help me feel relaxed and confident. For example, when I travel I usually wear jeans and a soft T-shirt so I can move easily.

建議: Give a clear opinion first, then explain the reason with one specific detail. Use correct grammar (e.g. "I like wearing T-shirts, but I can't because..."), avoid sentence fragments and double negatives. Finish the thought in 2–3 sentences.

範例: I would like to wear T-shirts, but I usually cannot because my culture prefers more modest clothing. If I had the chance, I would wear simple, plain T-shirts at home for comfort.

建議: Answer directly and give a specific reason and an example. Correct verb forms and word choice (e.g. "choose" not "choosing"; avoid unclear phrases like "steal every time"). Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I really like fashion and want to look well put together. For example, I often try on several outfits before deciding what to wear to an event.

建議: Give a clear contrast between weekday and weekend clothing. Use simple, complete sentences and linking words like "on weekdays" and "at weekends". Provide one specific example for each case.

範例: Yes. On weekdays I wear smart, professional clothes for work, such as a blouse and trousers. At weekends I prefer casual outfits like jeans and a hoodie so I can relax.

建議: State your favorite colours clearly in one sentence, then add one specific reason or example in a second sentence. Reduce hesitations and use correct grammar ("my preferred colours are").

範例: My preferred colours are white and black because they are classic and easy to match. I also sometimes wear pink or red when I want a more romantic or lively look.

× I like to wear the white clothes and the pink clothes then give me a good feelings because I I will be fresh.

✓ I like to wear white clothes and pink clothes because they give me good feelings and make me feel fresh.

Using 'the' before plural categories like 'clothes' is unnecessary here; omit the definite article. 'Give me a good feelings' has a number and article mismatch and wrong word order: use 'they give me good feelings' or better 'they make me feel fresh.' Remove the duplicated 'I'. Use plural agreement between 'they' and 'give'.

× Also I like to wear some.

✓ Also I like to wear some of them.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'some' which needs an object ('some of them' or 'some clothes'). Provide the noun after 'some' to complete the idea.

× I usually want to wear a comfortable clothes because with them I feel comfortable, confident and comfortable.

✓ I usually want to wear comfortable clothes because they make me feel comfortable and confident.

'Want to' is acceptable but 'a comfortable clothes' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'clothes' — remove 'a'. Avoid repeating 'comfortable' twice; replace the second with 'they make me feel' and keep parallel adjectives. Replace 'with them' by 'they' for clarity.

× When I decided to go to trip, I usually close.

✓ When I decide to go on a trip, I usually dress casually.

Tense and word choice are inconsistent. Use present simple 'decide' to match habitual action 'I usually'. 'Go to trip' is incorrect preposition and missing article; use 'go on a trip'. 'I usually close' is wrong verb; likely meant 'dress' or 'wear casual clothes'.

× I usually wear comfortable clothes.

✓ I usually wear comfortable clothes.

This sentence is correct; no change needed. It uses present simple appropriately to describe habitual action.

× Me, I like wear T-shirt, but I can't wear it because my culture don't doesn't give us the the possibility to wear like those clothes, but when I.

✓ I like wearing T-shirts, but I can't wear them because my culture doesn't allow us to wear such clothes.

Start with subject 'I' not 'Me, I'. Use 'like wearing' or 'like to wear' and plural 'T-shirts' or 'a T-shirt'. Use 'can't' + base verb. 'Don't doesn't' is redundant and incorrect; use 'doesn't' for 'culture' (singular). Remove duplicate 'the the'. 'Give us the possibility' is awkward; use 'allow us' or 'permit us'. The sentence ends incomplete; remove trailing 'but when I' or complete the thought.

× Yes, I spend a lot of time when I choosing clothes because I like fashion very very much and I want to steal every time for a good clothes and good.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I like fashion very much and I want to look good in nice clothes.

Use 'spend time choosing' (gerund) rather than 'when I choosing'. Reduce repeated 'very'. 'Steal every time' is incorrect word choice; likely meant 'spend time' or 'take time to choose' or 'try to find' — corrected to 'want to look good in nice clothes'. 'a good clothes' mixes article and plural; use 'nice clothes' or 'a good outfit'.

× Yes, I will write first series of clothes on account and weekdays.

✓ Yes, I wear one style of clothes for weekdays and a different style for weekends.

'I will write first series of clothes on account and weekdays' is unclear and ungrammatical. Replace with clear habitual contrast: 'I wear one style... for weekdays and a different style for weekends.' Use 'wear', not 'write'.

× For example, when I when I have work in this day, when I am going to work I wish again with the clothes, but when I arrive.

✓ For example, when I have work during the day, I wear formal clothes to work, but when I arrive home I change into casual clothes.

Remove duplicated 'when I'. Use 'have work during the day' or 'have work that day'. 'I wish again with the clothes' is incorrect; likely 'I dress formally' or 'I wear formal clothes'. Complete the contrast by adding 'I change into casual clothes' to finish the idea.

× Umm, my preferred color are uh, my previous color are uh, white and black, but I sometimes like to wear like pink and also red because with head I feel it is very romantic.

✓ My preferred colors are white and black, but I sometimes like to wear pink and red because they feel very romantic to me.

Use plural 'colors' with 'are'. Remove duplicated phrases. 'Like' used twice is unnecessary. 'With head I feel it is very romantic' is incorrect; use 'they feel very romantic to me' or 'they seem romantic.' Ensure subject 'they' (colors) agrees with plural verb 'feel'.