服装— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer more direct and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words, correct grammar (use 'it feels' and 'outfit' not 'costume'), and give one specific reason or example. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

範例: I prefer wearing outfits with lace because it looks elegant and feminine. For example, I often choose a lace-trimmed blouse when I go to a family dinner because it makes me feel dressed up without being too formal.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence and correct grammar (use 'I prefer casual clothes to smart clothes' and 'they seem more suitable for older people'). Add a brief reason with a linking word like 'because' and a short example.

範例: I prefer casual clothes to smart clothes because they are more comfortable and reflect my age. For instance, I usually wear jeans and sneakers to university rather than formal shirts and trousers.

建議: Respond directly and use correct tense and phrasing (e.g. 'I used to like T-shirts, but not anymore'). Use linking words like 'however' and provide a brief reason and example to be specific.

範例: I used to like wearing T-shirts because they were easy and comfortable. However, now I rarely wear them because I prefer a slightly smarter style for going out with friends.

建議: Give a direct topic sentence and fix word order and tense (e.g. 'Yes, I do'). Explain the routine with linking words and a reason, without adding irrelevant phrases.

範例: Yes, I do. Every night I pick my clothes for the next day, and I often make small changes in the morning to match the weather or my plans.

建議: Good clear answer. Improve grammar and use linking words: say 'I have to wear' and 'however' or 'but' when contrasting. Add a short specific example of weekend style.

範例: Absolutely. During weekdays I have to wear my university uniform, but on weekends I wear casual, freestyle outfits like jeans and graphic tees when I meet friends.

建議: Start with a clear statement and avoid repetition. Use correct word order and remove fillers. Provide a specific preference or a typical example with linking words like 'for example'.

範例: I'm not sure I have a favourite colour, but I often wear white at the weekend. For example, my friends say I usually wear a white top when we go out together.

× It's feel a little more feminine emotion.

✓ It feels a little more feminine.

The verb 'feel' needs to agree with the singular subject 'it' so use 'feels' (third person singular). Also 'feminine' is an adjective describing the noun; 'emotion' is unnecessary and awkward here. Use 'feminine' alone to describe the quality. Suggestion: use 'It feels a little more feminine.'

× I prefer to wear a casual look more than the smart clothes because I am a teenager and the smart clothes is more older than my age.

✓ I prefer to wear a casual look rather than smart clothes because I am a teenager and smart clothes are too old for me.

Several issues: 'smart clothes' is plural so use 'are' not 'is' (subject-verb agreement). 'More older' is redundant; use 'too old' or 'older than my age' is awkward—'too old for me' is natural. 'Rather than' is a better contrast connector than 'more than' here. Suggestion: simplify and match number and comparative forms.

× Now I don't like to wear the T-shirts, but in around 8 years ago I'm very like to wear the T-shirts because it's so easy to wear.

✓ Now I don't like to wear T-shirts, but about eight years ago I liked wearing T-shirts because they were so easy to wear.

Do not use 'the' before a general plural noun 'T-shirts' here. Time expressions: use 'about eight years ago' not 'in around 8 years ago'. 'I'm very like to wear' is incorrect—use past simple 'I liked wearing' or 'I used to like wearing'. Use plural pronoun 'they' to refer to T-shirts and past tense 'were' for 'so easy to wear.' Suggestion: correct article use, time expression, verb tense and pronoun agreement.

× But now I think T-shirt is more casual than my age.

✓ But now I think T-shirts are too casual for my age.

Use plural 'T-shirts' for general reference and 'are' for agreement. 'More casual than my age' is ungrammatical; say 'too casual for my age.' Suggestion: use correct number, verb agreement and preposition 'for'.

× Of course I in every night I will choose my outfits for tomorrow, then in the morning I will correct it again.

✓ Of course, every night I choose my outfit for the next day, and in the morning I adjust it again.

The original has redundant subject placement and awkward tense/modal use. Use simple present 'I choose' for habitual actions and 'adjust' or 'fix' in the morning. Use 'outfit' (singular) or 'outfits' consistently; 'for the next day' is a natural phrase. Suggestion: use clear subject-verb-object order and consistent tense for habitual actions.

× And where?

✓ (This sentence is unclear; likely remove or clarify as 'And where do you go?' if asking about destination.)

'And where?' is a fragment lacking context and a main verb; it's unclear who or what is being asked. If the student intended to ask where they go when hanging out, a full question like 'And where do you usually go?' is needed. Suggestion: form complete questions with subject and verb.

× Absolutely, because in the weekdays I must to wear the uniform of my university, but in the weekends I have the freestyle outfits.

✓ Absolutely, because on weekdays I must wear my university uniform, but on weekends I can wear casual outfits.

Do not use 'must to'; use 'must' followed by base verb 'wear'. Use prepositions 'on weekdays' and 'on weekends' not 'in the weekdays/weekends.' 'Freestyle outfits' is unnatural—'casual outfits' or 'my own clothes' is better. Suggestion: correct modal construction, prepositions and word choice.

× Umm, actually I don't know that I like which color the most, but my friend told told me that I always wear the white clothes in every weekend to hang out with hang out with with them.

✓ Umm, actually I don't know which color I like the most, but my friend told me that I always wear white clothes every weekend when I hang out with them.

Problems: word order in 'I don't know which color I like the most' is needed. Remove duplicate 'told' and repeated phrase 'hang out with'. Do not use 'the white clothes' for general habit—use 'white clothes' or 'a white shirt' depending on meaning. Use 'every weekend' rather than 'in every weekend.' Suggestion: correct word order, remove repetitions, and use proper preposition and article usage.