公园— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer grammatically correct, concise, and include a clear topic sentence plus one specific supporting detail. Use past tense for childhood, correct pronouns, and a linking word if adding detail.

範例: Yes, I liked going to parks as a child. I often went there with my friends, and we played games and rode bicycles together, which was very fun.

建議: Use present simple for current habits, correct subject-verb agreement, and give one clear specific example with a linking word. Keep it to 1–3 sentences.

範例: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. For example, I often go there in the afternoons after school to relax and exercise, and my friend usually runs while I read.

建議: Answer the question directly (about more parks) and avoid repeating excited fillers. Use clear, specific descriptions and linking words to explain why you would like more parks, with correct grammar and vocabulary.

範例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because places like Gardens by the Bay are beautiful and relaxing. For instance, the colourful flowers and butterflies there create a pleasant atmosphere for families.

建議: Give a direct, grammatically correct answer naming a park you want to visit and one specific reason. Use future tense or modal verbs correctly and avoid vague words. Keep it short and coherent.

範例: Yes, I would like to visit a mountain park in the future, such as a national park where the climate is cooler. I think the fresh air and scenery would be very relaxing.

× Yes, I like to going to parks as a child.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks as a child.

The sentence refers to a past habit (as a child), so use the past tense 'liked' rather than present 'like'. Also 'to going' is ungrammatical; use the gerund 'going' after 'liked'. Suggestion: 'I liked going to parks as a child.'

× We play together so fun.

✓ We used to play together and had so much fun.

This sentence aims to describe past activity and enjoyment. 'Play' should be past ('used to play' or 'played') and 'so fun' needs rephrasing to 'had so much fun' because 'fun' is a noun and requires a verb. Suggestion: 'We used to play together and had so much fun.'

× He also happy play bicycle.

✓ He was also happy to ride a bicycle.

Pronoun 'He' likely refers to a friend; verb 'play' with 'bicycle' is wrong—use 'ride a bicycle'. Missing verb 'was' for past description. Also include 'to' before the infinitive 'ride'. Suggestion: 'He was also happy to ride a bicycle.'

× Yes, of course we are still like going to parks until now, sometime at the afternoon, come back school, we play together.

✓ Yes, of course we still like going to parks now; sometimes in the afternoon after coming back from school, we play together.

Mix of tenses and awkward phrases: 'are still like' should be 'still like' (simple present for current habits). 'Until now' is unnatural here—use 'now'. 'Sometime at the afternoon' should be 'sometimes in the afternoon'. 'Come back school' needs 'coming back from school'. Maintain present habitual tense. Suggestion: 'Yes, of course we still like going to parks now; sometimes in the afternoon after coming back from school, we play together.'

× He always run.

✓ He always runs.

Subject-verb agreement for third person singular: add -s to the verb in simple present. 'He runs' is correct. Suggestion: 'He always runs.'

× I would like going to Garden by the Bay, it's so fun, so wonderful.

✓ I would like to go to Gardens by the Bay; it's so fun and wonderful.

After 'would like' use the infinitive 'to go', not the gerund. Also the park name is 'Gardens by the Bay'. Use a semicolon or conjunction for clarity and 'and' instead of a comma before 'wonderful'. Suggestion: 'I would like to go to Gardens by the Bay; it's so fun and wonderful.'

× A lot flower MMM then so colourful.

✓ There are a lot of flowers; they are so colorful.

Use plural 'flowers' and include 'there are' to introduce existence. 'MMM then' is unclear and should be removed. Use 'they are so colorful' to describe them. Suggestion: 'There are a lot of flowers; they are so colorful.'

× Have some butterfly, it's so beautiful there I love.

✓ There are some butterflies; it's so beautiful there, I love it.

Missing subject and verb—use 'There are' to state existence and plural 'butterflies'. Add 'it' after 'I love' to complete the clause. Suggestion: 'There are some butterflies; it's so beautiful there, I love it.'

× Yes, of course I hope I can going to the promo is the the feel so nice, so beautiful.

✓ Yes, of course I hope I can go to the promenade; it feels so nice and beautiful.

Use infinitive 'go' after 'can' (not 'going'). The phrase 'promo is the the feel' is ungrammatical—likely meant 'promenade' or 'promotional event'; I suggest 'promenade'. Use 'it feels' for describing sensation and 'and' for linking adjectives. Suggestion: 'Yes, of course I hope I can go to the promenade; it feels so nice and beautiful.'

× The weather also cold then I love it.

✓ The weather is also cold then, so I love it.

Missing verb 'is' to describe weather. Add conjunction 'so' to show cause-effect and a comma for clarity. Also 'then' might mean 'there' or 'then' as in 'at that time'—if meaning 'there', use 'there'; if meaning 'in that season', 'then' is acceptable. Suggestion: 'The weather is also cold there, so I love it.'

× I can.

✓ I can go.

'Alone 'I can' is incomplete—add the verb to show what the speaker can do. Based on context, 'I can go' completes the idea. Suggestion: 'I can go.'