视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答问题，再补充一个具体原因和经历。注意区分“views”（景色）和“wheels”（车轮）；“legacy”不适合描述自然景色，可以用“beautiful”或“stunning”。“Sea pictures”可改为“photos of the sea”，并避免重复使用“take pictures/photos”。

範例: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy photographing beautiful landscapes because they make memorable pictures. I often take photos when I go hiking; last week, I took some pictures of the sea and shared them with my friends.

建議: 需要清楚说明你喜欢城市还是乡村景色。答案中的“Rob areas”和“sandway”意思不明确；如果你想说乡村，可使用“rural areas”“scenery”或“landscape”。补充具体理由时，可以提到乡村安静、空气清新，以及田野或山脉等景物；同时注意语法，如“taking photos of the fields and mountains”。

範例: I prefer rural views because they are peaceful and the scenery is beautiful. The open fields and mountains help me relax, and I enjoy taking photos of them when I visit the countryside.

建議: 回答结构清楚，也提供了个人理由和例子。注意“wheels”应为“views”；“walking by the local mountains and rivers”不太自然，可以说“walking near the local mountains and rivers”。结尾可用连接词把熟悉的景色与家庭回忆联系起来，并避免句子过长。

範例: I prefer the views in my own country because they feel familiar and meaningful to me. For instance, I often walk near the local mountains and rivers, which remind me of home and my family.

× I think nature wheels are very legacy and they make good photos, so I often take photos when I go hiking.

✓ I think nature wheels are very beautiful and they make good photos, so I often take photos when I go hiking.

“Legacy”通常表示“遗产”或“传统”，不适合用来描述景色，也不能自然地与“very”搭配。这里应使用可以描述景色、且适合由“very”修饰的形容词，例如“beautiful”。

× For example, I like working in the countryside and the taking photos of the field and the mountains

✓ For example, I like working in the countryside and taking photos of the field and the mountains.

“the countryside”是常见固定表达，因此要保留“the”；但“taking photos”中的“taking”是与“working”并列的动名词，不应在前面加“the”。并列结构应保持一致：“working … and taking …”。