视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: You answer directly and support your opinion with relevant examples and a clear reason. The response is natural and well organized. To make it more personal and specific, add a brief example of a particular place or occasion when you took a memorable photo; avoid relying on general phrases such as “special moments.”

範例: Yes, definitely. I enjoy photographing natural scenery, especially mountains and waterfalls. Last year, I took some photos of a waterfall during a family trip, and they bring back great memories whenever I look at them.

建議: State your preference clearly instead of saying “those areas,” which is vague. Your comparison and reasons are relevant, but the final sentence is incomplete and “Green Mountains” should not be capitalized unless it is a place name. Finish the thought with a specific example or feeling.

範例: I definitely prefer rural views because I enjoy being surrounded by nature. The countryside has beautiful landscapes, fresh air, and a peaceful atmosphere. For example, I feel much more relaxed when I see green mountains than when I’m surrounded by busy streets and tall buildings.

建議: You answer the question directly and give specific examples of Sri Lanka’s scenery. The contrast introduced by “However” is useful, but the final sentence is unfinished; explain what you hope to experience abroad. You could also include a specific Sri Lankan location to make the answer more vivid.

範例: I’d say I prefer the views in my own country, Sri Lanka, because it has such varied scenery, from beaches to misty mountains. I feel a strong connection to these places because they are part of my home. For example, I especially enjoy the views around Ella. I’d still love to visit other countries and experience landscapes that are very different from ours.

× I feel much more relaxed when I look at Green Mountains and.

✓ I feel much more relaxed when I look at green mountains.

The sentence ends with and, which signals that another item or clause should follow. Since the thought is complete without it, remove and. Use lowercase for green mountains when referring to mountains generally rather than a specific named place.

× However, I'd also love to explore other countries someday to experience.

✓ However, I'd also love to explore other countries someday to experience their unique landscapes.

The verb experience needs an object, but the original sentence ends before saying what the speaker wants to experience. Add an object, such as their unique landscapes, to complete the sentence.