视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question directly at the beginning and avoid the incomplete phrase “I am honestly not that.” You also repeat “honestly,” so use it only once. Improve the final part by explaining why you prefer photographing places rather than being photographed. Use a linking word such as “however” to make the contrast clearer, and say “as a memory” or “to remember the places” instead of “to keep it as a memory.”

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of beautiful views, especially when I visit somewhere new. I like photographing places because the pictures help me remember my trips. However, I do not really enjoy having my own picture taken because I am quite shy.

建議: State your preference clearly in the first sentence and complete the final idea. Avoid beginning two sentences with “But”; instead, connect the contrast with “although” or “however.” Replace “going to nature trips” with “going on nature trips,” and provide a specific reason for preferring urban views, such as bright lights, modern buildings, or lively streets. Keep the answer to three or four complete sentences.

範例: I prefer urban views because I enjoy bright city lights, modern buildings, and busy streets. Although I like going camping and hiking from time to time, I feel more comfortable in a city. I especially enjoy looking at the skyline at night because it makes the city feel energetic and exciting.

建議: Give a direct preference before adding your travel example. The answer currently ends incomplete after “I like how it’s just,” so finish the sentence by describing Singapore specifically. Use more natural expressions such as “I have visited Singapore about four times” instead of “I've gone there I think 4 times already.” Add a comparison with views in your own country and explain your preference with one or two concrete details.

範例: I generally prefer views in other countries because they offer a greater variety of scenery and architecture. For example, I have visited Singapore about four times, and I love its clean streets, impressive skyline, and beautiful gardens. However, I also appreciate views in my own country because they feel more familiar and remind me of home.

× I am honestly not that.

✓ I am honestly not that outgoing.

The word 'that' is incomplete here because it does not clearly describe the speaker. Adding the adjective 'outgoing' completes the meaning and makes the sentence grammatically complete.

× I like taking pictures to keep it as a memory of the places that I went to.

✓ I like taking pictures to keep them as memories of the places that I visit.

The pronoun 'it' is singular, but it refers to 'pictures', which is plural. Use 'them' instead. Also, 'pictures' and 'places' should be plural because the speaker is referring to multiple items.

× I also enjoy going to nature trips like camping and hiking.

✓ I also enjoy going on nature trips like camping and hiking.

The correct preposition used with 'trips' is usually 'on', as in 'go on a trip'. Use 'go to' for destinations, but use 'go on' for trips and journeys.

× But I feel like my personality leans more towards the city lights and.

✓ But I feel like my personality leans more toward the city lights.

The conjunction 'and' is left at the end without connecting to another idea, so the sentence is incomplete. Remove 'and' unless you add another complete idea after it.

× I've already traveled a couple of times in Asia and I really enjoyed going to Singapore.

✓ I've already traveled to a couple of places in Asia, and I really enjoyed going to Singapore.

Use 'travel to' when referring to destinations. The phrase 'traveled in Asia' can describe traveling within the region, but 'traveled to a couple of places in Asia' is more accurate for visiting several destinations.

× I've gone there I think 4 times already and I like how it's just.

✓ I've been there, I think, four times already, and I like how vibrant it is.

The phrase 'how it's just' is incomplete because 'just' does not provide a description. Add an adjective or another complement, such as 'how vibrant it is'. Also, commas help separate the inserted phrase 'I think' from the main sentence.