视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is honest and relevant, but it is somewhat wordy and has minor grammar issues. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two concise supporting reasons using linking words. Correct small grammar errors (e.g. plural nouns and verb forms) and avoid redundancy. Try to keep it within 3–4 sentences.

範例: No, I'm not really into photography. I prefer to enjoy moments rather than pause to take photos, because I don't own good equipment and getting a nice shot can be time-consuming. However, I sometimes take quick snapshots on special occasions so I can remember them later.

建議: The response answers the question clearly and offers reasons, but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Improve by using correct plural forms and verb tenses, adding a linking word, and giving one specific example to make the answer more vivid. Keep sentences concise and natural.

範例: I prefer views in rural areas because I love natural scenery such as mountains, rivers and fields. Moreover, rural sunsets are especially relaxing and peaceful, and I often feel refreshed after watching the sky change colour in the countryside.

建議: Good personal stance and reasons, but the answer includes some unclear phrasing and minor grammar mistakes. Improve by organizing into a clear topic sentence plus one or two specific supporting points, and replace vague words (e.g. 'local') with precise terms like 'local places' or 'familiar landscapes'.

範例: I prefer the views in my own country because I feel more connected to the scenery and culture. Also, there are many beautiful local places I haven't explored yet, and familiar landscapes often remind me of my childhood memories.

× I prefer to enjoy moments rather than stopping to take pictures and I don't have a very good camera or phone and it's quite a bit of hassle to capture nice pictures.

✓ I prefer to enjoy moments rather than stop to take pictures, and I don't have a very good camera or phone, so it's quite a hassle to capture nice pictures.

The phrase 'rather than stopping to take pictures' should use the base form 'stop' after 'rather than' when expressing preference (correct form: rather than stop). Also 'it's quite a bit of hassle' is wordy; 'quite a hassle' is more natural. Use a coordinating conjunction 'so' to connect cause and effect. Improve punctuation by adding commas to separate clauses.

× I prefer the views in rural areas because I love the natural scenery like mountain, rivers and fields so I think it's much more relaxing and peaceful as I always feel refreshed when I saw the moment of sunsets in countryside.

✓ I prefer the views in rural areas because I love the natural scenery like mountains, rivers and fields, so I think it's much more relaxing and peaceful, and I always feel refreshed when I see sunsets in the countryside.

Use plural 'mountains' to match other plural nouns. 'When I saw the moment of sunsets' mixes tenses and is awkward; use present tense 'see' to match general preference and 'sunsets' as a plural noun. Add the definite article 'the' before 'countryside'. Add commas and 'and' to improve sentence structure and clarity.

× Personally, I prefer the views in my own country because I feel more connected to the scenery here and there are many more beautiful places I haven't explored and local will often remind me of my own childhood.

✓ Personally, I prefer the views in my own country because I feel more connected to the scenery here, and there are many beautiful places I haven't explored, and local people often remind me of my own childhood.

The noun 'local' is incorrect alone; use the noun phrase 'local people'. Add commas to separate clauses. 'Many more beautiful places' is acceptable but 'many beautiful places' is clearer here. Maintain consistent tense and noun forms.