视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and complete your sentence. Start with a clear topic sentence, then briefly give one or two specific reasons or examples. Avoid trailing off and unnecessary repetition. Use linking words (for example, because or so) to connect ideas. Keep your answer within three to four sentences.

範例: Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because changing angles helps capture the whole scene. For example, when I photograph a landscape I try low and high angles to show depth, and as a dentist I take clinical photos from consistent angles to document cases clearly.

建議: Good structure and clear contrasts. To improve, add a specific detail or short example to make your preference more vivid, and use a linking phrase such as however or on the other hand to signpost the contrast. Keep it to three sentences maximum.

範例: I appreciate both, but I often prefer rural views because sunsets and wide landscapes feel peaceful and relaxing. However, I also enjoy urban scenes for their energy and colorful street life, which provide strong photographic contrasts.

建議: Clarify and correct vocabulary and grammar. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one specific reason for domestic views and one for foreign views. Replace unclear phrases (e.g., “family traps”) with correct expressions such as “family traditions” or “family memories.” Use linking words like furthermore or meanwhile. Limit to three sentences.

範例: I like views in both my country and abroad. At home, familiar scenery brings comfort and fond family memories, while abroad I enjoy new cultures and exciting landscapes that broaden my perspective.

× As a dentist, I often need to document patient cases, so I take photos from.

✓ As a dentist, I often need to document patient cases, so I take photos.

The original sentence ends with an incomplete prepositional phrase 'from' that has no object, creating a sentence structure error. Remove the unnecessary 'from' to complete the thought. Suggestion: avoid leaving trailing prepositions without objects; if you meant a specific perspective, complete the phrase (for example, 'from different angles').

× I enjoy the familiar views of my home country because they make me feel more comfortable and relax, and they also reminds me of family traps.

✓ I enjoy the familiar views of my home country because they make me feel more comfortable and relaxed, and they also remind me of family trips.

There are three issues: 'relax' is a verb but here an adjective 'relaxed' is needed to describe the feeling; 'reminds' does not agree with the plural subject 'they' so it should be 'remind' (subject-verb agreement relates to pronoun usage in referring to 'views'); 'traps' is a wrong word choice and should be 'trips'. To improve, use the adjective 'relaxed' after 'feel', ensure verb agrees with its plural subject, and choose the correct noun 'trips'.

× At the same time, travelling overseas is more exciting.

✓ At the same time, traveling overseas is more exciting.

This is primarily a spelling/variety issue rather than grammar: 'travelling' is British English spelling while 'traveling' is American. Either is correct depending on the variety of English chosen; ensure consistency throughout your responses. If using American English, use 'traveling'; if British English, keep 'travelling'.