视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Use correct grammar (singular/plural, verb forms) and avoid unclear phrases like “when I was real.” Use linking words to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I especially like photographing landscapes and interesting buildings because they capture a place’s character. For example, I recently photographed an old bridge at sunset, which showed both the structure’s detail and warm light.

建議: Give a clear direct answer first, then support it with two specific reasons using linking words (for example, because, and). Fix grammar (use plural/singular and correct prepositions). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

範例: I prefer rural views because I enjoy natural scenery and quiet places. For example, I like photographing fields and forests, which often have interesting light and wildlife. In contrast, urban scenes can feel repetitive to me, although they’re great for architecture photography.

建議: Answer directly, then explain with clear reasons and a specific example. Correct grammar (tense, articles, word choice) and remove unclear words like “morphine.” Use linking words such as because and for example to make your reasoning coherent.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because they feel fresh and unfamiliar. For example, when I travel abroad I notice different architectural styles and landscapes that inspire me to take new kinds of photos. Because of that curiosity, I often spend extra time exploring streets and landmarks.

× Different views is about beautiful scenery and beautiful people or some nice architectures.

✓ Different views are about beautiful scenery, attractive people, or some nice buildings.

Subject 'Different views' is plural so use plural verb 'are' (subject-verb agreement). 'Beautiful people' is acceptable but 'attractive' is a more natural adjective; 'architectures' is incorrect—use the noun 'buildings'. Also add commas for clarity.

× I like to record it and when I was real.

✓ I like to record them and remember the real moments.

Pronoun should agree with plural 'views' so use 'them'. The clause 'when I was real' is unclear and ungrammatical; likely intended meaning is to remember real moments, so rephrase to 'remember the real moments' to convey preserving memories.

× The rural areas is more interesting and can find out something interesting in the this place.

✓ Rural areas are more interesting, and you can find something interesting in these places.

'The rural areas' is plural so use 'are'. 'Can find out something interesting in the this place' is ungrammatical: use 'you can find something interesting in these places' to correct pronoun and article usage and improve clarity.

× But urban is more normal and.

✓ But urban areas are more ordinary.

Sentence is incomplete and 'urban' used alone is awkward; use 'urban areas' as the subject and 'ordinary' instead of 'normal' for natural phrasing. Remove the trailing conjunction 'and' to complete the sentence.

× I like both but I would choose the rural areas because I like nature more.

✓ I like both, but I would choose rural areas because I prefer nature.

Use 'prefer' to express general preference in present tense rather than 'like nature more'. Remove 'the' before 'rural areas' unless referring to specific ones. The revised sentence is more natural and consistent in tense.

× I prefer views in other countries because in my own country I was familiar with old things so I was boring about it, but in other country I didn't build it.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because in my own country I am familiar with old things, so I get bored by them; in other countries I did not build those places.

Use present simple 'am familiar' to describe a general state and 'get bored' to express becoming bored. 'Was boring about it' is incorrect. Clarify 'didn't build it' to 'did not build those places' to make the meaning grammatical. Also pluralize 'countries' and 'places' for consistency.

× I will be very curious about this new views I can find morphine I interesting.

✓ I am very curious about the new views I can find; I find them interesting.

Tense and wording are incorrect: use present simple 'I am very curious' for a general feeling. 'This new views' should be 'the new views' and plural agreement. The fragment 'morphine I interesting' is nonsensical—replace with 'I find them interesting' to express interest clearly.