视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar, clarity and naturalness. Begin with a clear topic sentence, use correct verb forms and article/quantity expressions, and provide one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. For example, say whether you enjoy taking photos and why, then give an example of the types of views you photograph.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photography helps me notice small details. For example, I often photograph city skylines and coastal scenes, and I try to capture them at different times of day to get interesting light.

建議: Make the response more specific and natural. State your preference clearly, then give a reason with a linking word and a specific example. Replace vague phrasing like “better for me” with concrete reasons (e.g., more variety, architecture, convenience).

範例: I prefer urban views because cities offer more architectural variety and interesting street scenes. For example, I like photographing old buildings and busy markets, which give me lots of visual detail to work with.

建議: Correct the grammar and expand with specific details. State your preference clearly, use a linking word to explain why, and give a concrete example of what is different or appealing about foreign views (landscape, culture, colours).

範例: I prefer views in other countries because they often have different landscapes and cultural elements that feel fresh to me. For instance, when I visited Japan I was fascinated by the contrast between modern skyscrapers and traditional temples, which I rarely see at home.

× I like take 4 pictures in different ways.

✓ I like taking four pictures in different ways.

After 'like' when expressing preferences in general, use the gerund (verb + -ing). Also write numbers in words for formality ('4' -> 'four'). Suggestion: use 'I like taking...' and spell out single-digit numbers in formal speech.

× I prefer urban areas because it is better for me.

✓ I prefer urban areas because they are better for me.

The subject 'urban areas' is plural, so the pronoun and verb must agree in number. 'It is' is singular and incorrect here. Use the plural pronoun 'they' with 'are'. Suggestion: ensure pronouns match the number of the noun they refer to.

× I love in other countries because it's different than my country.

✓ I love being in other countries because they are different from my country.

The verb 'love' needs a noun or gerund object; use 'love being in...'. Also 'different from' is the standard preposition for comparisons (not 'different than'). Additionally, 'other countries' is plural so refer to them with 'they are' rather than 'it's'. Suggestion: use 'love being in other countries' and 'different from' and keep consistent plural agreement.