视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is natural and communicates the main idea, but it is slightly informal and contains filler words. Make the response more concise and structured: start with a clear topic sentence, follow with one specific reason and an example, and avoid contractions and fillers for a more polished tone.

範例: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because each scene evokes different emotions. For example, I once photographed a sunset on a mountain trail and the warm colors helped me remember how peaceful I felt that day.

建議: Good structure with a clear comparison and reasons for each preference. To improve, reduce repetitive phrases and use linking words to make the contrast clearer. Give one concrete example to support each preference to make your answer more specific.

範例: It depends on my mood. If I'm stressed, I prefer rural views because the quiet countryside calms me—for instance, walking beside a river helps me relax. In everyday life I like urban views for their energy and architecture, such as modern plazas and busy streets that feel lively.

建議: Your opinion is clear, but the answer relies on generalizations and hesitations. Avoid fillers and give a balanced, specific reason or an example from another country that you like. Also acknowledge any positives at home to sound nuanced and avoid overgeneralizing.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because I find some foreign landscapes and traditional neighborhoods more relaxing—for example, small European towns with low-rise buildings and historic colors feel calmer. That said, some areas in my country, like ancient water towns, are also very beautiful and peaceful.

× taking pictures is a kind of great method to record the way I go through.

✓ taking pictures is a great way to record the experiences I go through.

The phrase 'a kind of great method' is awkward and unidiomatic. The verb 'go through' is correct but 'the way I go through' is unclear; 'experiences I go through' is clearer. Use 'way' or 'method' alone, and follow with a clear noun: 'a great way to record the experiences I go through.'

× Well actually I think it depends on the different situations to be honest.

✓ Well, actually I think it depends on the situation, to be honest.

'Depends on the different situations' is wordy and inconsistent with singular 'it'. Use 'depends on the situation' or 'depends on different situations.' Also add comma after introductory 'Well' and remove redundant words for clarity.

× If I feel stressful at that time, I think I prefer views in rural areas cause the environment is quite peaceful.

✓ If I feel stressed at that time, I think I prefer views in rural areas because the environment is quite peaceful.

'Feel stressful' incorrectly uses an adjective that describes external causes; the correct form is 'feel stressed.' Also 'cause' is informal; use 'because.'

× But actually in my daily life I prefer views in urban areas because I think it is bustling and pretty.

✓ But actually, in my daily life I prefer views in urban areas because I think they are bustling and pretty.

'Views' is plural, so pronoun 'it' should be plural 'they.' Add a comma after 'actually' for clarity.

× Well I think I prefer views in other countries cause in China everywhere is the high rise buildings, even in the scenic spots.

✓ Well, I think I prefer views in other countries because in China there are high-rise buildings everywhere, even in scenic spots.

Use 'because' instead of informal 'cause.' Word order and articles: 'everywhere is the high rise buildings' is ungrammatical — use 'there are high-rise buildings everywhere.' Hyphenate 'high-rise.' Remove 'the' before 'scenic spots.'

× Uh, whether the designs or the colors they chose umm, they can't help people to relax umm, but always make people feel more stressful.

✓ Whether it is the designs or the colors they choose, they can't help people relax and often make people feel more stressed.

Problems: inconsistent tense and pronoun use. Use 'whether it is' to introduce alternatives. 'They chose' should be present 'they choose' to match general statement. 'Can't help people to relax' is better as 'can't help people relax.' 'Make people feel more stressful' is incorrect; 'feel more stressed' is correct because 'stressful' describes situations, not people's feelings. Also replace 'always' with 'often' for realistic moderation.