视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise, correct basic grammar, and give specific examples. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add 1–2 supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix verb forms and vocabulary mistakes (e.g., 'to taking' → 'taking', 'orts' → likely 'others' or 'plants').

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph city skylines at sunset and quiet park scenes in the morning because the light makes them look dramatic. I also like close-up shots of animals, such as dogs and cats, when they show interesting expressions.

建議: Give a clear preference with a concise reason and at least one specific supporting detail. Use linking words (e.g., 'because', 'for example') correctly and avoid repeating words. Correct plural and article errors ('rural areas').

範例: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy the dynamic mix of architecture and street life. For example, tall buildings, parks, and colorful markets create varied scenes that are interesting to photograph.

建議: State your preference directly, give a clear reason and a specific example. Avoid vague phrases and repetition. Use correct sentence structure and linking words like 'because' and 'for instance' to make your answer coherent.

範例: I prefer views in my own country because I feel connected to the landscapes and cultural scenes. For instance, the coastal towns here have unique colors and traditions that I find more beautiful and meaningful than places I've seen abroad.

× Yes, I like to taking pictures of different views.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views.

The verb 'like' is followed by either the infinitive (to take) or the gerund (taking). 'to taking' mixes both forms and is incorrect. Use 'like taking' or 'like to take'. Suggestion: choose 'I like taking...' or 'I like to take...'.

× I like the views.

✓ I like the views.

This sentence is grammatically correct but repetitive in context; no change needed. Keep as is or combine with the following sentence to avoid repetition. Suggestion: combine sentences for clarity, e.g., 'I like the views, and I enjoy taking photos of them.'

× I like the I like to take pictures and I'd like to take pictures of dogs, cats, animals, orts.

✓ I like to take pictures, and I'd like to take pictures of dogs, cats, and other animals.

The original contains repetition and a nonword 'orts'. Also 'like to take' is correct; ensure parallel structure and list punctuation. Replace 'orts' with 'other animals'. Suggestion: use consistent structure and correct vocabulary: 'I like to take pictures of dogs, cats, and other animals.'

× I prefer views in urban areas more than rural area areas because because I like them more and I think they are more beautiful and they have more views in it and more.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas to those in rural areas because I like them more; I think they are more beautiful and there are more interesting scenes.

Errors: repeated words ('because because', 'area areas'), wrong singular/plural ('rural area areas'), incorrect preposition and phrasing ('more views in it'). Use comparative structure 'prefer A to B' and correct plural 'rural areas'. Also simplify 'more views in it' to 'more interesting scenes' or 'more views'. Suggestion: say 'I prefer views in urban areas to those in rural areas because...' and avoid repetition.

× I prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

✓ Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

This line is actually the examiner's question and is correct. No student correction needed. (No change)

× I prefer this in my own country because in my own country it has more views that they are more beautiful than in other countries and I like them more, and they are.

✓ I prefer it in my own country because there are more beautiful views there than in other countries, and I like them better.

Problems include unclear reference ('this'), awkward phrasing ('it has more views that they are more beautiful'), and redundant clauses. Use 'there are' to introduce existence of views and 'there' to refer to the country. Use 'better' for preference. Suggestion: be concise: 'I prefer views in my own country because there are more beautiful views there than elsewhere.'