视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more accurate and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid factual errors and redundant words, and add one specific detail about why you like photographing views. Also keep answers concise (max 5 sentences) and use correct names (e.g., ‘one of the New Seven Wonders of the World’).

範例: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because landscapes capture emotions. For example, when I visited India I photographed the Taj Mahal; I loved how the morning light reflected on the marble, creating soft pastel colors. This kind of scene helps me practice composition and lighting.

建議: Give a direct topic sentence and support it with clear, specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (quiet, still → quieter, more peaceful) and phrasing (‘take photos in those communities’). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and include one concrete example or image.

範例: I prefer views in rural areas because they are quieter and more peaceful, which helps me focus on composition. For example, wide rice fields at sunrise offer long shadows and vivid colors that make my photos more atmospheric.

建議: Start with a concise direct answer and avoid repetition. Provide one or two specific reasons or examples that show what makes your country special (e.g., types of landscapes, festivals, or cultural scenes). Use linking words to connect ideas and correct minor errors (‘I I’ → ‘I’).

範例: I prefer views in my own country because the Philippines offers diverse scenery and lively cultural scenes. For example, coastal sunsets, vibrant street festivals, and smiling locals at markets create colorful photographic opportunities that I rarely find elsewhere.

× Yes, I love to take pictures of different sceneries.

✓ Yes, I love to take pictures of different scenery.

'Scenery' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'sceneries'. Use 'scenery' to refer to various views in general. Suggestion: say 'different scenery' or 'different scenes' if you want a countable alternative.

× For example, when I went to India, I was able to take a photo of Taj Mahal, which is one of the seven Nash natural wonders.

✓ For example, when I went to India, I was able to take a photo of the Taj Mahal, which is one of the seven natural wonders of the world.

Missing definite article: 'the Taj Mahal' requires 'the'. 'Nash' appears incorrect; likely intended 'natural wonders of the world'. Also word order 'natural wonders of the world' is the correct phrase. Suggestion: use 'the Taj Mahal' and the standard phrase 'natural wonders of the world'.

× I prefer going to rural areas and taking photo in those community because it is more quiet, it is more still and the landscape there is superb.

✓ I prefer going to rural areas and taking photos in those communities because they are quieter, calmer, and the landscapes there are superb.

Several issues: 'taking photo' should be plural 'taking photos'; 'community' plural 'communities'; use plural pronoun 'they' to match plural noun; comparative 'more quiet' should be 'quieter'; 'more still' is awkward—use 'calmer'; 'landscape' plural 'landscapes' to match general meaning. Suggestions: ensure noun number agreement and use standard comparative forms.

× I prefer views in my own country because it has natural resources.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because it has natural resources.

Sentence is grammatical, but minor clarity: 'it' correctly refers to 'my own country'. No correction needed; included for completeness.

× Our country is very rich in culture and tradition.

✓ Our country is very rich in culture and tradition.

Sentence is correct and natural; no grammatical change needed.

× That's why you can see happy faces everywhere. I I always love my country and I would love people to visit here and travel here in the Philippines someday.

✓ That's why you can see happy faces everywhere. I always love my country and I would love people to visit and travel here in the Philippines someday.

Remove duplicated 'I'. 'Visit here and travel here' is repetitive; combine to 'visit and travel here'. Keep 'the Philippines' with no article change—'in the Philippines' is correct. Suggestion: avoid unnecessary repetition and duplicated words.