视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the response more natural and grammatical, give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words to clarify contrast and avoid redundancy. Correct grammar (plural/singular, pronouns) and tighten phrasing.

範例: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views, especially mountains and the sea. Although many landscapes may seem similar at first, each one has unique details and lighting that make it special, so I like capturing those subtle differences.

建議: Begin with a clear topic sentence and then explain with specific reasons. Use linking words (because, so) and correct verb forms. Avoid vague expressions like "gives a vibe" without elaboration; describe what makes it calm.

範例: I prefer views in rural areas because they feel much calmer and less crowded. For example, open fields and forests have natural sounds and wide horizons, so they help me relax and appreciate nature without the distraction of buildings.

建議: State your preference clearly and support it with specific, concrete reasons. Improve grammar ("prefer using my country" → "prefer those in my own country") and provide examples or comparisons. Keep it concise and coherent.

範例: I prefer views in my own country, the Philippines, because it has many islands and mountains with breathtaking scenery. For instance, seeing coastal sunsets and lush mountain landscapes reminds me of home and brings me peace, even when I see them in photos or on calendars.

× I love taking picture of it 'cause they are all looks the same but at the same time not and it gives a different parts that.

✓ I love taking pictures of them because they all look the same but at the same time different, and they show different aspects.

Multiple issues: 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' (pluralization), so Grammar Problem Type 1 also applies but we limit corrections to listed types; 'taking picture' corrected to 'taking pictures'. 'It' referring to views should be 'them' (incorrect pronoun, type 12) but here fixed to 'them'. 'They are all looks' is incorrect word order and verb form: use 'they all look' (present tense third person plural), which relates to Subject-verb agreement (type 27) and Present tense issue (type 6); 'not' used alone is unclear so rephrased to 'different'. 'it gives a different parts that' is ungrammatical: corrected to 'they show different aspects.' Explanation: use plural nouns for multiple items, match pronouns to plural antecedents, use base verb after plural subject (they look), and prefer clear phrasing like 'show different aspects'. Suggestions: use plural 'pictures', use 'them' for plural antecedent, use 'they look' rather than 'they are looks', and restructure sentence for clarity.

× I prefer the rural areas. It's just give a vibe that is calm.

✓ I prefer rural areas. They just give a calm vibe.

'the rural areas' can be simplified to 'rural areas' but that's stylistic; main grammar issue: 'It's just give' mixes singular subject 'it' with plural verb 'give' and wrong contraction. Correct subject is 'they' (plural: rural areas), so use 'They just give a calm vibe.' This is a subject-verb agreement and present tense issue (use present simple 'give' to match plural subject). Suggestion: ensure subject and verb agree in number and use appropriate pronoun for plural nouns.

× It's like showing how earth feels like when there are no buildings that is just popping out of nowhere.

✓ It's like showing how the earth feels when there are no buildings popping out of nowhere.

Problems include missing article 'the' before 'earth' (article errors, type 22) and redundant 'feels like'—use 'feels' (present tense) for clarity. 'That is just popping' is awkward; reduce to 'buildings popping out of nowhere.' This is incorrect use of prepositions/particles and sentence structure (type 11 and 26). Suggestion: use 'the earth' and avoid redundant 'like' after 'feels', and use present participle 'popping' without an extra relative 'that is'.

× I prefer the using my country.

✓ I prefer using my country.

The phrase 'the using my country' wrongly inserts the definite article 'the' before a gerund phrase. Remove 'the' to form 'prefer using my country.' Alternatively, say 'I prefer my own country.' This is an article/preposition misuse (type 11 and 22). Suggestion: after 'prefer' you can use a gerund without 'the', or use 'my own country' for clarity.

× My country is the Philippines and it has a lot of islands, mountains that just give me peace when I see it even in the calendars.

✓ My country is the Philippines; it has many islands and mountains that give me peace when I see them, even in calendars.

Multiple issues: 'a lot of' is informal but acceptable; 'islands, mountains that just give me peace' needs clearer connection—use 'islands and mountains that give me peace.' Pronoun 'it' incorrectly refers to plural 'islands and mountains' so use 'them' (incorrect pronoun, type 12). 'Even in the calendars' should be 'even in calendars' (article use). This is sentence structure and pronoun agreement error (type 26 and 12). Suggestion: match pronouns to plural nouns, join coordinated nouns with 'and', and simplify 'a lot of' to 'many' for better grammar.