视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời nên tự nhiên hơn, tránh tách câu không cần thiết và lỗi ngữ pháp. Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp, rồi cung cấp thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: cảm xúc bạn có, loại cảnh bạn thích chụp). Tránh dùng dấu chấm giữa 'feel.' và tính từ; dùng cụm từ hoàn chỉnh như 'feel happy and enjoy it' hoặc 'it makes me feel happy and relaxed'.

範例: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos of different views because it relaxes me and helps me notice details I would otherwise miss. For example, I love capturing sunrise colors and interesting textures in buildings.

建議: Câu trả lời cần chính xác về ngữ pháp (chia động từ, sử dụng đại từ phù hợp) và rõ ràng hơn. Bắt đầu với một câu chủ đề ngắn (I like both), rồi nêu lý do cụ thể cho từng loại cảnh (ví dụ: urban = architecture, lights; rural = nature, tranquility). Dùng liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'while' để liên kết ý. Tránh câu mơ hồ như 'has the landscapes'.

範例: I actually like both. Urban areas attract me with interesting architecture and vibrant lights, while rural areas offer peaceful landscapes and natural colors, so I enjoy photographing both for different reasons.

建議: Cần trả lời rõ ràng và tránh mâu thuẫn: bạn nói 'prefer views in other countries' nhưng lý do đưa ra cho thấy bạn không thích sự yên tĩnh — hãy giải thích cụ thể điều bạn thích hơn ở nước ngoài (ví dụ: kiến trúc độc đáo, nhịp sống sôi động). Tránh tiếng ừ ờ ('uh') và kết thúc câu không hoàn chỉnh ('so I don't like'). Nên đưa ví dụ cụ thể và dùng liên từ để làm rõ lý do.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy seeing unique architecture and lively street scenes that I don't often find at home. For instance, I like photographing colorful markets and historic buildings when I travel abroad.

× Yes I do. Taking pictures of different views makes me feel. Happy and enjoyable.

✓ Yes, I do. Taking pictures of different views makes me feel happy and gives me enjoyment.

The original has a sentence fragment and incorrect adjective use. 'Makes me feel.' is an incomplete clause; 'happy' is the correct adjective to follow 'feel'. 'Enjoyable' describes something that causes enjoyment, not the feeling itself; use 'gives me enjoyment' or 'I enjoy it'. Suggestion: link clauses correctly and choose the proper word form (adjective for feelings, noun for experience).

× Actually I like both of it.

✓ Actually, I like both of them.

The phrase 'both of it' is incorrect because 'both' refers to two items and requires a plural pronoun 'them' or a plural noun. Use 'both of them' or 'both' followed by the noun. Suggestion: identify the two items being compared and use plural pronouns or nouns (e.g., 'both of them' or 'both urban and rural areas').

× Urban areas or rural areas has the landscapes, the colors and the atmosphere difference so I can enjoy it.

✓ Urban areas and rural areas have different landscapes, colors, and atmospheres, so I can enjoy them.

Subject-verb agreement: 'Urban areas and rural areas' is a plural subject and requires the plural verb 'have' (not 'has'). Also 'the landscape, the colors and the atmosphere difference' is awkward; use 'different landscapes, colors, and atmospheres'. Pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to plural 'areas', so use 'them'. Suggestion: match plural subjects with plural verbs and keep pronouns consistent in number; use parallel noun forms and 'different' to express contrasts.

× Well, I prefer views in other countries more because in my own country, the vehicle, the streets, uh, and some buildings are very quiet and peaceful, so I don't like.

✓ Well, I prefer views in other countries more because in my own country, the vehicles, the streets, and some buildings are very quiet and peaceful, so I don't like them as much.

The original sentence ends abruptly with 'so I don't like.' which is incomplete; it needs an object (what is not liked). Use plural noun 'vehicles' instead of singular 'vehicle' when listing multiple items. Also include the pronoun 'them' to refer back to the listed items, and 'as much' clarifies comparison. Suggestion: complete clauses by providing the object of 'like' and ensure nouns and pronouns agree in number.