视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and direct. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers like “umm,” and add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Aim for natural phrasing and varied vocabulary (e.g., use “angles” and “positions,” or “capture candid moments”).

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, I often photograph my friends from various angles to help them find their best pose, and this usually makes the pictures look more natural.

建議: Begin with a direct answer about preference (or say you like both), then use linking words to compare. Keep sentences shorter and vary vocabulary (e.g., “cityscapes,” “countryside,” “tranquil”). Provide one specific example or feeling to make it concrete.

範例: I like both, but I’m especially drawn to cityscapes because the skyline and neon lights feel energetic. However, the countryside is relaxing too, for instance when I hike among mountains and pine trees.

建議: Answer directly and avoid hedging phrases like “Well.” Use correct grammar (e.g., “views” not “every views”) and include a clear reason with one or two specific examples. Link ideas with words like “however” or “because.”

範例: I don’t have a strong preference because every country has unique scenery. However, Taiwan is special to me because it combines coastlines, mountains and large cities in a small area, so you can enjoy varied views in one trip.

× Yes, I like to take pictures in different angles for my friends umm because I would love to help them find their best angles and look pretty on the pictures.

✓ Yes, I like to take pictures from different angles for my friends because I would love to help them find their best angles and look pretty in the pictures.

Use of preposition with 'angles' should be 'from different angles' not 'in different angles' (preposition error). Also 'on the pictures' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in the pictures' when referring to appearance within photos. Although the listed type is 'Verb + -ing form', the actual issues match preposition use (Grammar Problem Type ID 11). Suggestion: use 'from' with 'angles' and 'in' with 'pictures' to be idiomatic.

× Yes, I enjoy the skyline of the cities with massive skyscrapers and vibrant neons everywhere.

✓ Yes, I enjoy the city skylines with massive skyscrapers and vibrant neon lights everywhere.

Original uses 'the skyline of the cities' which is awkward and 'neons' is not standard; 'neon lights' or 'neon signs' is preferred. Also plural agreement and word order improved to 'city skylines'. This is a pronoun/word choice and pluralization issue matching Grammar Problem Type ID 12 and 1. Suggestion: use 'city skylines' and 'neon lights' for natural phrasing.

× And As for rural areas, it is always relaxing to enjoy the natural scenes such as mountains and trees.

✓ As for rural areas, it is always relaxing to enjoy natural scenery such as mountains and trees.

Use 'natural scenery' (uncountable) rather than 'natural scenes'. Also remove the redundant 'And' and fix capitalization. This matches 'There be' type broadly because of noun form/usage (Grammar Problem Type ID 3). Suggestion: use uncountable 'scenery' for general landscapes.

× Well, I don't have a preference. I appreciate every views.

✓ Well, I don't have a preference. I appreciate every view.

'Every' must be followed by a singular noun, so 'every views' is incorrect; use 'every view' or 'all views'. This matches Grammar Problem Type ID 14. Suggestion: use 'every view' or 'all views' depending on meaning.

× But in Taiwan I would say we have many advantages because we are islands that boast coastline, mountains and the sheer scale of the city at the same time.

✓ But in Taiwan I would say we have many advantages because we are an island that boasts coastline, mountains and the sheer scale of the city at the same time.

The student says 'we are islands' but refers to Taiwan as a single entity; choose singular or plural consistently. If referring to Taiwan (singular), use 'an island that boasts' (singular verb 'boasts'). Also 'coastline' may need an article or pluralized depending on intent. This is a subject-verb agreement and noun number issue (Grammar Problem Type ID 27 and 1). Suggestion: decide singular/plural reference and match verb and noun forms accordingly.