视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and use a clear topic sentence. Avoid vague phrases and repetition. Add one specific detail about what kinds of views you like and why, using a linking word to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because they capture peaceful moments. For example, I like taking photos of sunsets over the sea since the colors are beautiful and they help me relax when I look at them later.

建議: Start with a clear preference statement and reduce hesitations. Give a specific reason or two and use linking words (for example, because, so). Avoid vague words like "good"; give concrete descriptions.

範例: I prefer rural views to urban ones because they are quieter and more natural. For example, in the countryside I can photograph rolling hills and quiet rivers, which feel peaceful and refreshing.

建議: Give a direct answer and explain briefly with a clear reason. Remove apologies and correct grammar (e.g., "my own country" not "my city own country"). Provide a linking word (because) and a specific supporting detail.

範例: I prefer views in my own country because I know the best spots and feel comfortable there. Since I haven't traveled abroad, I enjoy photographing familiar landscapes like the rivers and old towns near my city.

× Yes, I actually like to take pictures of different views, which is so beautiful and so relaxing to see in the future.

✓ Yes, I actually like to take pictures of different views, which are so beautiful and so relaxing to look at.

The relative clause refers to 'views' (plural), so the adjective should agree: use 'are' not 'is'. Also 'to see in the future' is unnatural here; use 'to look at' to describe viewing pictures now or in general. Suggestion: match verb number to the noun and use a natural verb phrase like 'look at' or 'view'. Grammar problem type ID:13

× I do prefer, uh, rural areas than urban areas because, umm, there are so many things to do like in that area, like uh, so peaceful and good.

✓ I prefer rural areas to urban areas because there are so many things to do there, and they are peaceful and pleasant.

Comparative preference uses 'prefer A to B', not 'prefer A than B'. 'There are so many things to do like in that area' is ungrammatical; use 'there' to refer to the area and a concise clause. 'So peaceful and good' uses 'good' (an adjective for people/things) awkwardly; 'pleasant' fits better. Suggestions: use the correct comparative structure 'prefer X to Y', replace vague 'like' fillers, and keep subject-verb agreement for 'they are'. Grammar problem type ID:27

× Honestly I do prefer those in my own city own country. Sorry because I never travel other countries than my country so I do like more enjoy with my own country.

✓ Honestly, I prefer those in my own city and my own country. Sorry, I have never traveled to other countries, so I enjoy my own country more.

Pronoun and noun phrase usage is confused: 'those' needs a clear referent (views), and 'own city own country' needs conjunction. Use present perfect 'have never traveled' to indicate life experience up to now. 'Travel other countries than my country' is incorrect; use 'travel to other countries'. 'I do like more enjoy with my own country' is ungrammatical; correct to 'I enjoy my own country more'. Suggestions: make references explicit (e.g., 'those views'), use correct verbs with 'to' (travel to), and choose appropriate tense for life experiences. Grammar problem type ID:12}]} } Explanation: Provided three suggestions for sentences with errors per given types and included IDs.