视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and clear: give a short topic sentence saying whether you like taking photos, then add one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetitions, fillers (umm), and grammatical errors (use correct verb forms and articles). Aim for 2–3 coherent sentences within the 5-sentence limit.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I like photographing landscapes because they help me notice small details in nature, and I can use the photos later to remember places or share them with friends.

建議: Answer directly with a clear preference, then give two specific reasons connected with linking words (for example, because, and). Avoid repetition and incorrect word choices (use 'people' not 'peoples', 'natural beauty' instead of repeating 'beauty'). Keep sentences concise and grammatically correct.

範例: I prefer views in rural areas because they usually have more natural beauty and peaceful surroundings. Also, local people tend to be friendly, which makes visiting villages more enjoyable.

建議: State your preference clearly, then give specific reasons linked logically (for example, because, so). Avoid vague phrasing and repetition; use correct possessive forms ('my country') and coherent sentence structure. Limit to 2–3 sentences and include concrete details (e.g., examples of peaceful places or traditions).

範例: I prefer views in my own country because I know the best quiet spots and can appreciate familiar natural scenery. For instance, I often visit a nearby lakeside to relax with family because it is peaceful and easy to reach.

× As I like to be, I like to taking pictures of different views, umm views, umm views, umm views pictures can we views because we, we have to, we uh, we have to learn new more things and also used evidence in further further.

✓ As I like to be, I like taking pictures of different views because we have to learn new things and also use them as evidence in the future.

Error: misuse of the -ing form after 'like' and incorrect verb forms. After 'like' when followed by a verb, use the gerund 'taking' (or the infinitive 'to take'); 'like to taking' is incorrect. Redundant fillers were removed and verbs were corrected: 'have to learn new more things' -> 'have to learn new things'; 'used evidence in further further' -> 'use them as evidence in the future'. Suggestion: choose either 'I like taking pictures' or 'I like to take pictures' and keep verb forms consistent. Remove unnecessary repeated words and use clear noun phrases ('the future').

× As actually I I prefer using in rural areas because because rural rural municipality say municipalities peoples are very good kind and and beauty and lots of beauty of natures natures.

✓ Actually I prefer rural areas because people in rural municipalities are very kind and there is a lot of natural beauty.

Error: incorrect preposition 'using in rural areas' and repeated/incorrect nouns. 'Prefer' does not need 'using'; say 'prefer rural areas'. 'Municipality say municipalities peoples' is incorrect word order and pluralization; correct to 'people in rural municipalities'. 'Beauty of natures natures' should be 'natural beauty' or 'a lot of natural beauty'. Suggestion: remove 'using', place 'in' before the location if needed ('in rural areas'), use 'people' not 'peoples' for general reference, and use the adjective 'natural' for clarity.

× I prefer using my own countries because my country is where is my country is is is is world and beauty of nature.

✓ I prefer my own country because it has wonderful natural scenery.

Error: plural 'countries' is incorrect when referring to a single speaker's country. Also redundant and ungrammatical phrases 'where is my country is is is is world and beauty of nature' were corrected to a concise noun phrase. Suggestion: use singular 'country' and a clear structure 'I prefer my own country because it has...'.

× Peaceful atmosphere and people also friendly when we are going to busy time to relax uh, for uh relax for friends and family.

✓ It has a peaceful atmosphere and friendly people, so when life is busy it is a good place to relax with friends and family.

Error: sentence fragments and incorrect structure. 'Peaceful atmosphere and people also friendly' lacks a verb and proper linking; 'when we are going to busy time to relax' is ungrammatical. The corrected sentence adds a subject and verbs ('It has', 'so...it is') and clarifies meaning: busy times make the country a good place to relax. Suggestion: connect ideas with conjunctions, include verbs, and use proper expressions like 'when life is busy' and 'a good place to relax'.