视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be natural and clear: use correct verbs and avoid unnecessary words. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Also correct vocabulary mistakes ("baking" → "taking", "face. Smith" → "Facebook" or simply "Facebook"). Keep answers to no more than 3–4 short sentences.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph tall buildings and green landscapes, because I like the contrast between city and nature. I usually post my favorite photos on Instagram and Facebook.

建議: Answer directly and use correct comparative structures and linking words. Begin with a clear topic sentence ("I prefer rural views to urban ones"), then give specific reasons and a short example. Correct grammar ("rural areas has" → "rural areas have"; "relaxing to ice" unclear → "more relaxing"). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I prefer rural views to urban ones because rural areas have more green landscapes and feel more peaceful. For instance, I enjoy walking by fields and lakes, which helps me relax compared with noisy city streets.

建議: Make a direct statement and support it with a clear, specific reason. Fix grammar and repetition ("already seen it already done", "I I just seen"). Use linking words like "because" or "for example" and correct tense ("I have seen", "I have only seen"). Avoid vague references; name one clear example correctly.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because they offer sights I haven’t experienced at home. For example, I’ve always wanted to visit Paris to see the Eiffel Tower in person rather than just seeing photos on social media.

× Yes, I do like baking photos from different views.

✓ Yes, I do like taking photos of different views.

The student used 'baking' which is incorrect for making photographs; the correct verb is 'take' (taking photos). This is a word choice / verb form error. Use the gerund 'taking' after 'do like' to express liking an activity. Suggestion: replace 'baking' with 'taking'.

× Like tall buildings, green sceneries and static views so I can post it in social media like Instagram and face. Smith.

✓ I like tall buildings, green scenery, and still views so I can post them on social media like Instagram and Facebook.

Errors: 'green sceneries' should be uncountable 'green scenery' or 'green scenes'; 'static views' is awkward — use 'still views' or 'scenic stills'; pronoun agreement: 'it' should be 'them' to match plural 'views'; preposition 'in social media' should be 'on social media'; 'face. Smith' is a misspelling of 'Facebook' and incorrect spacing/punctuation. Suggestion: use plural agreement, correct preposition, and proper platform name 'Facebook'.

× I prefer rural areas views than urban areas because rural areas has green landscapes and it is relaxing to ice than urban areas has tall buildings and.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas to those in urban areas because rural areas have green landscapes and are more relaxing than urban areas, which have tall buildings.

Multiple issues: comparative structure 'prefer A to B' not 'prefer A than B' (Grammar Problem Type 26/14); noun phrase order: 'rural areas views' should be 'views in rural areas'; subject-verb agreement: 'rural areas has' should be 'rural areas have'; pronoun/reference: 'it is relaxing to ice' is incorrect and unclear — likely meant 'are more relaxing'; sentence fragment at end. Suggestion: use 'prefer X to Y', correct subject-verb agreement, and make comparative clear.

× I prefer views in other country than my own country because in my own country I have already seen it already done.

✓ I prefer views in other countries to those in my own country because I have already seen them there.

Errors: 'other country' should be plural 'other countries' or 'another country'; comparative uses 'prefer A to B'; 'my own country' repeated is redundant; 'seen it already done' is ungrammatical — use 'seen them there' (plural agreement with 'views'). Suggestion: use 'prefer X to Y', match plural forms, and avoid redundancy.

× In other country I I just seen it in social media like in Paris has it the Eiffel Tower?

✓ In other countries, I have just seen them on social media; for example, Paris has the Eiffel Tower.

Problems: 'In other country' should be 'In other countries' or 'In another country'; double 'I I' is a typo; 'just seen' needs auxiliary 'have' for present perfect: 'have just seen'; pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to refer to 'views'; 'in social media' should be 'on social media'. The clause 'like in Paris has it the Eiffel Tower?' is ungrammatical — corrected to a clear example: 'for example, Paris has the Eiffel Tower.' Suggestion: use correct article/number, include auxiliaries in perfect tenses, and structure the example clearly.