视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and add one specific detail or reason. Use linking words if adding more than one point.

範例: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, I like capturing coastal sunsets because the changing light creates dramatic colors.

建議: Give a clear direct answer then support it with specific reasons. Use linking words (e.g., because, especially, for example) and avoid vague or redundant words like "lands everything."

範例: I prefer rural areas because they offer wide-open landscapes and peaceful scenery. For example, rolling hills and farmland provide varied textures and natural light that I find more photogenic.

建議: Expand slightly with a brief explanation to make your answer informative. Use a linking word (e.g., however, and) to compare and give a short example of each to show contrast.

範例: I enjoy views both at home and abroad. At home I appreciate familiar spots with personal memories, and abroad I like discovering new architecture and landscapes that are different from what I know.

× Yeah, I like to take different pictures and different of different views.

✓ Yeah, I like to take different pictures of different views.

The phrase 'and different of different views' is ungrammatical and redundant. This is a sentence structure error and involves incorrect use of verb + object. Remove the extra words so the verb 'take' correctly takes the object 'different pictures' and the prepositional phrase 'of different views' clarifies what the pictures are of. Suggestion: keep it simple: 'I like to take different pictures of different views.'

× I prefer more in rural areas because of their landscapes, scenery and lands everything.

✓ I prefer rural areas because of their landscapes and scenery.

The original has incorrect preposition usage ('prefer more in') and redundant/incorrect wording ('lands everything'). Use 'prefer' directly with the noun phrase: 'I prefer rural areas.' 'Because of their landscapes and scenery' correctly explains why. Remove 'lands everything' because it is ungrammatical and redundant. For variety, you could say 'because of the landscapes and scenery there.'

× I prefer both in my country and other countries.

✓ I prefer both in my country and in other countries.

When contrasting two places with 'both', include parallel prepositions for clarity: 'in my country and in other countries.' The original omitted the second 'in', which weakens parallel structure. Alternatively, you can say 'I prefer views both in my country and in other countries.'