视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using correct tense and linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases (e.g., “made me looks”). Use plural/singular correctly and articles where needed.

範例: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because it helps me notice beauty I might otherwise miss. For example, shooting a skyline at sunset highlights colors and shapes that you don’t see during the day, so I often bring my camera when I walk around the city.

建議: Keep the answer natural and correct grammar. Begin with a direct statement, then give two clear, specific reasons linked with words like “because” and “also.” Correct subject-verb agreement and awkward phrasing (e.g., “is make environment more humanity from the start”) by using precise expressions such as “make life more convenient” or “create a more human environment.”

範例: I prefer urban views because I enjoy modern architecture and the minimalist design of many city buildings. Also, cities have better amenities and public transport, which make daily life more convenient and pleasant.

建議: Answer directly and provide specific, correctly worded examples. Use correct noun forms and articles (e.g., “views,” “my country has many places with beautiful views”). Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like “high guess mineral.” Name real landmarks or features accurately and give one brief reason why you prefer them.

範例: I prefer views in my own country because it has many beautiful places. For instance, Kuala Lumpur has impressive skyscrapers and city views from observation towers, while Perak offers lovely beaches and coastal scenery that I enjoy visiting.

× Yes I like taking picture of different views.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' because the student refers to multiple instances of taking photos. Use plural after 'taking' when speaking generally about repeated actions. Also add a comma after 'Yes' for natural punctuation.

× This is because when I taking picture from different views it show me the beautiful from other view and the special from others view that's made me looks.

✓ This is because when I take pictures from different angles, they show me the beauty and uniqueness of other views, which makes me happy.

Several errors match the 'Verb + -ing form' and related types: 'when I taking' is incorrect; after 'when' use base verb 'take' for simple present describing habitual action. 'picture' should be plural 'pictures'. 'from different views' is better as 'from different angles' for clarity. 'it show' should be 'they show' to agree with plural subject 'pictures' (subject-verb agreement). 'the beautiful' is incorrect noun/adjective use; 'the beauty' is correct noun. 'the special from others view' should be 'the uniqueness of other views' for grammatical and semantic correctness. 'that's made me looks' should be 'which makes me happy' — 'made me looks' is wrong tense/form and word choice; 'look' not appropriate. Overall revise to maintain present habitual tense.

× Also, cities offer better amenities and public transport which make daily life more convenient and is make environment more humanity from the start.

✓ Also, cities offer better amenities and public transport, which make daily life more convenient and create a more humane environment.

The clause after 'which' refers to 'amenities and public transport' (plural), so 'make' is correct. However 'is make' is ungrammatical — use 'create' or 'make' without 'is'. 'environment more humanity' is incorrect adjective/noun use; use adjective 'humane' to describe environment. 'from the start' is unnecessary and unclear, so removed. Maintain present simple to describe general truth.

× I prefer view in my own country because my my country have a lot of place that have a good views such as Kuala Lumpur have a high guess mineral and at Perak have a beach beach beach.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because my country has many places with good scenery; for example, Kuala Lumpur has tall skyscrapers, and Perak has beaches.

Multiple pluralization and subject-verb agreement errors: 'view' should be 'views' (plural). 'my my' is repetition error (typo). 'my country have' should be 'my country has' (singular subject requires 'has'). 'a lot of place' should be 'many places'. 'have a good views' should be 'with good scenery' to avoid mixed structures. 'Kuala Lumpur have' should be 'Kuala Lumpur has' and 'high guess mineral' is unclear — likely meant 'high skyscrapers' or 'tall skyscrapers'. 'at Perak have a beach beach beach' is repetitive and needs cleanup: 'Perak has beaches.' Keep present simple for preferences and general facts.