视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more natural and concise: correct grammar (singular/plural), avoid repetition, and add one specific detail about why sunsets appeal to you. Use linking words to connect ideas. Keep within 3–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially sunsets. I watch the sunset almost every day because the colours change subtly each time, and I like capturing those variations on my camera. For instance, yesterday’s sky turned bright orange with streaks of purple, which looked great in photos.

建議: Improve clarity and grammar: state your preference clearly (urban or rural), correct vocabulary (e.g. 'scenery' not 'few/fields'), avoid filler words, and give 1–2 specific examples. Use a linking phrase to introduce reasons.

範例: To be honest, I prefer urban scenery for photography because there is always interesting human activity. For example, I enjoy capturing commuters on the street or people playing with their dogs in small parks, as these moments show everyday life and create dynamic photos.

建議: Clarify and correct vocabulary and grammar: say 'scenery' or 'views' instead of 'few', fix tense and article use, and make sentences concise. Provide a specific reason or example of how foreign scenery differs. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example'.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because I have lived in my city for about 20 years and am used to its scenery. For example, visiting a coastal town abroad with different architecture and colours makes me feel excited and inspires me to take new kinds of photographs.

× Yes, I like taking picture of different views, especially sunset.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views, especially sunsets.

The nouns 'picture' and 'sunset' should be plural because the speaker refers to taking multiple photos of various views and observes sunsets frequently. Use plural nouns to match a general/habitual meaning: 'pictures' and 'sunsets'. Suggestion: Use plural when referring to more than one or to repeated/habitual events, e.g., 'I like taking pictures' and 'especially sunsets.'

× I observe sunsets every day and each sunset are unique unique.

✓ I observe sunsets every day and each sunset is unique.

The subject 'each sunset' is singular, so the verb must be singular 'is' not 'are'. Also remove the duplicated word 'unique'. Suggestion: Identify the subject (each sunset = singular) and ensure the verb agrees in number: 'each ... is'. Remove accidental repetitions.

× So I think the color is different and I really enjoy taking photos of them.

✓ So I think the colors are different and I really enjoy taking photos of them.

When referring to multiple sunsets, 'color' should be plural 'colors', and the verb 'is' should change to plural 'are' to agree with the plural noun. This matches the earlier idea that each sunset has different colors. Suggestion: Keep number agreement across noun and verb: 'the colors are different.'

× To be honest, I prefer few in urban area and for a couple of reason.

✓ To be honest, I prefer the views in urban areas and for a couple of reasons.

'Prefer few' is ungrammatical; the speaker likely means 'prefer the views' or 'prefer being in' plus plural 'urban areas'. Also 'a couple of reason' should be 'a couple of reasons' (plural) because 'a couple' implies two items. Use the definite article 'the' before 'views' if referring to views mentioned earlier. Suggestion: Use clear noun phrases and correct quantifier agreement: 'I prefer the views in urban areas' and 'for a couple of reasons.'

× First, I think people, uh, commuting work or playing with their dog or their friends in the garden is interesting and I like to capture capture those fields.

✓ First, I think people commuting to work or playing with their dogs or with their friends in the park are interesting, and I like to capture those scenes.

Several issues: 'commuting work' needs preposition 'commuting to work'. 'their dog or their friends' number and parallelism -> 'their dogs or with their friends'. 'in the garden' is better as 'in the park' but if keeping 'garden' it's fine; also 'those fields' is wrong word choice; 'scenes' fits photographing views. Subject 'people ... are interesting' needs plural verb 'are'. Remove duplicated 'capture'. Suggestion: Use correct prepositions ('commuting to work'), keep parallel structure ('their dogs or their friends'), choose appropriate nouns for context ('scenes'), and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Actually I prefer few in other country because I live in my cities for about 20 years and I'm really accustomed with those few and in in the contrast, the other city feel will make me makes me feel exciting and new.

✓ Actually I prefer views in other countries because I have lived in my city for about 20 years and I'm really accustomed to those views; by contrast, the feeling of another city makes me feel excited and new.

Multiple problems resolved according to allowed types: 'prefer few' -> 'prefer views' (plural). 'other country' -> 'other countries' to match general preference. 'I live in my cities for about 20 years' should be present perfect 'I have lived in my city for about 20 years' and 'city' singular if referring to the speaker's city. 'accustomed with' should be 'accustomed to'. 'in in the contrast' -> 'by contrast'. 'the other city feel will make me makes me feel exciting and new' corrected to 'the feeling of another city makes me feel excited and refreshed' (changed wording: 'excited and new' is unidiomatic; 'refreshed' or 'renewed' better). Also fix subject-verb agreement 'makes me feel'. Suggestion: Use correct quantifiers and plurals ('views', 'other countries'), correct tense for duration ('have lived'), correct preposition ('accustomed to'), use common contrast phrase ('by contrast'), and ensure verb agreement and idiomatic expressions ('makes me feel excited and refreshed').