视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Reduce repetition, correct verb tense and article use, and make the answer more concise and structured. Begin with a clear topic sentence, add one specific detail, use a linking phrase, and keep it under five sentences. For example, avoid repeating words (‘different different’) and use past/present appropriately (e.g., ‘I like taking pictures… because I want to share moments’).

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, I often photograph sunsets because the colors change quickly, so I like to capture and share those moments with my friends and family.

建議: Answer directly and clearly, using a topic sentence stating preference (or saying you like both). Remove uncertain questions to the examiner and fix grammar. Use linking words (however, because, so) and give one specific reason and an example. Keep it concise and coherent.

範例: I prefer both urban and rural views. Urban areas offer interesting architecture and lively streets, while rural areas provide peaceful landscapes; for instance, I enjoy photographing city skylines at night but also return to a nearby countryside hill to capture sunrise scenes.

建議: Give a clear direct answer (prefer home or abroad or both) and correct grammar (singular/plural, verb forms). Avoid unclear phrases like ‘I prepared interviews’. Use a linking word to add a specific reason and an example of a country or scene to make it concrete.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because they often offer landscapes and cultures I haven't seen before. For example, I would love to photograph the fjords in Norway because their dramatic cliffs and light are very different from the scenery at home.

× Definitely, I like taking pictures of different different views because I wanted to share that moment, especially on sunset that I would love to capture and share them with my friends and family.

✓ Definitely, I like taking pictures of different views because I want to share those moments, especially at sunset when I love to capture and share them with my friends and family.

The speaker mixes past tense 'wanted' with present preferences; use present tense 'want' to match 'I like'. 'Different different' is a repetition error; remove duplicate. 'That' before 'I would love' is awkward; use 'when'. 'On sunset' is incorrect preposition; use 'at sunset'. 'That moment' should be plural 'those moments' to match 'different views' and 'them'. Suggestions: keep tense consistent (present), remove duplicate words, use correct preposition 'at', and match singular/plural references.

× Are you sure they like both? Because I want to explore and capture the moment where every time that I go there and I want to to make sure that everything is being secured to my photos and maybe from time to time I want I would go back there.

✓ I like both because I want to explore and capture the moments each time I go there, and I want to make sure everything is secure in my photos; maybe from time to time I would go back.

The response begins with an unclear question form 'Are you sure they like both?' which doesn't match the question; change to a statement 'I like both'. 'Capture the moment where every time that I go there' is ungrammatical; use 'capture the moments each time I go there'. Duplicate 'to to' should be 'to'. 'Everything is being secured to my photos' uses passive and incorrect preposition; use active 'secure in my photos' or 'capture in my photos'. 'Maybe from time to time I want I would go back there' mixes forms; simplify to 'maybe from time to time I would go back.' Suggestions: use consistent subject, correct pronouns, remove duplicates, correct prepositions, and simplify verb phrases.

× I prepared interviews in other countries because they are a really amazing views and breathtaking views that I wanted to see from my own eyes and experiencing the views of the other countries or the sceneries.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because they have really amazing and breathtaking scenery that I want to see with my own eyes and experience.

'I prepared interviews' is incorrect verb choice; likely meant 'I prefer' or 'I enjoy' — changed to 'I prefer'. 'They are a really amazing views' has article/number disagreement and incorrect pronoun; use 'they have amazing views' or better 'scenery'. 'Views' and 'scenery' redundancy; combine as 'amazing and breathtaking scenery'. 'That I wanted to see from my own eyes and experiencing' mixes tenses and forms; use present 'I want to see with my own eyes and experience'. Suggestions: use correct verb (prefer), ensure singular/plural agreement, avoid redundancy, keep verb tenses consistent, and use appropriate collocations like 'see with my own eyes' and 'experience scenery'.