视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific examples using correct verb forms and linking words. Avoid redundancy and unnecessary phrases.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph my meals to keep a record of my diet, and I also take landscape photos when I travel to capture memorable scenery.

建議: Use natural phrasing and correct grammar, and add one supporting reason with a linking word. Replace vague phrases with specific descriptions and avoid repetition.

範例: I prefer rural views because I live in a city and seeing the same streets every day feels monotonous. Moreover, rural landscapes are often more varied and peaceful, so they make my trips feel more refreshing.

建議: Make your answer clearer and grammatically correct. Give one clear reason and avoid repetition. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore) and correct tense/forms.

範例: At the moment I prefer views in my own country because I have been traveling abroad for about a month, so I want the familiarity of home. Therefore, I look forward to seeing local scenery and returning to my normal routine.

× For example I would take pictures of almost every meals to record my diet and also scenery pictures of course I like to record and left some footage of.

✓ For example, I would take pictures of almost every meal to record my diet, and also scenery pictures; of course I like to record and leave some footage.

Errors: plural noun with 'every' (should be 'every meal') and incorrect verb form 'left' (past) where infinitive 'leave' is needed after 'like to'. Also missing commas and coordination. Suggestion: use 'every' with singular countable noun, and use base form after 'to' + verb (to leave).

× I prefer views in rural areas.

✓ I prefer views of rural areas.

Preposition use: 'in rural areas' is acceptable but 'views of rural areas' more natural when discussing photographs. Suggestion: choose 'of' to indicate the subject of the photos.

× I live in cities and I feel very boring to see the same view every day.

✓ I live in a city and I find it very boring to see the same view every day.

Errors: 'cities' (plural) mismatches singular context; 'feel boring' incorrect—use 'find it boring' to express that something is boring to the speaker. Suggestion: use singular 'a city' if referring to one city, and fixed expression 'find it boring'. Also add 'it' as dummy subject.

× But if I'm in rural areas that means I am travelling or doing something that different than my daily route.

✓ But if I'm in rural areas, that means I am travelling or doing something different from my daily routine.

Errors: 'doing something that different than' is ungrammatical; use 'doing something different from' or 'different than' with caution; 'daily route' is better as 'daily routine'. Suggestion: use 'different from' + noun and 'routine' for habitual activities.

× Now I prefer view in my own country because I have travelled for one, one month, one month and a couple of days and a couple of days now and I'm about to go back to my normal life and I'm kind of get too used to the views in foreign countries now.

✓ Now I prefer views in my own country because I have travelled for one month and a couple of days, and I'm about to go back to my normal life; I'm kind of getting too used to the views in foreign countries.

Multiple issues: 'view' should be plural 'views'; repetition and disfluent time expression 'one, one month...' should be 'one month and a couple of days'; 'kind of get' incorrect, use present participle 'getting'; punctuation and redundancy reduced. Suggestion: simplify time expression and use 'getting' to indicate gradual change.