视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 문장이 자연스럽지 않고 복수형·관사 사용 등 문법 실수가 있습니다. 응답은 주제 문장으로 직접 답하고, 추가 설명은 한두 문장으로 구체적으로 연결어를 사용해 이어야 합니다. 예를 들어 언제, 어떤 장면을 선호하는지(빛, 구도, 감정)를 구체적으로 말하세요. 또한 최대 5문장 이내로 간결하게 유지하고, 복수형과 관사를 바르게 사용하세요.

範例: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. I often take pictures while I'm walking because I notice interesting details like reflections and street scenes. For example, I like capturing how the morning light falls on buildings. This helps me practice composition and tell a story with my photos.

建議: 답변에 문법 오류와 불완전한 문장이 있습니다. 주제 문장으로 선호를 명확히 밝히고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하며 연결어를 사용해 대조를 보여주세요(예: however, although). 불필요한 반복을 피하고 문장을 완성하세요.

範例: I usually prefer urban views because I enjoy the lights and architecture at night. For example, city skyline lights and illuminated streets create dramatic contrasts that I find beautiful. However, I also appreciate rural scenery for its peaceful atmosphere and natural colors.

建議: 문법과 어휘 선택이 부정확합니다. 직접적인 주제 문장을 말한 뒤 이유를 구체적으로 제시하고 연결어를 이용해 논리적으로 이어가세요. ‘experience’를 현재 완곡하게 표현하고, 이유와 기대감을 덧붙이면 좋습니다.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because I'm curious about different cultures and landscapes. For instance, I want to photograph unfamiliar architecture and local markets to learn more about how people live. Visiting new places would broaden my perspective and inspire my photography.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different view.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views.

The noun 'view' should be plural because 'different' refers to more than one; use 'views'. Suggestion: use plural nouns after words like 'different' or quantifiers (e.g., 'different places', 'many views').

× I like to take picture when I'm walking.

✓ I like to take pictures when I'm walking.

The noun 'picture' should be plural because the speaker refers to taking photos generally, not a single one. Use 'pictures' for general activities. Also add a comma if needed: 'I like to take pictures when I'm walking.'

× I usually prefer urban areas because I like building light in night.

✓ I usually prefer urban areas because I like building lights at night.

Preposition 'in' is incorrect here; use 'at night' for time of day. Also 'building light' needs plural 'lights' to refer to multiple lights on buildings. Suggestion: use 'at night' for nocturnal context and pluralize countable nouns when talking generally.

× It's so beautiful to me.

✓ It is so beautiful to me.

No plural error in content, but contraction expanded for formality; however original is acceptable. No grammatical change needed other than optional formality. (If treated as grammar: maintain 'It is' or 'It's'.)

× I also like rural areas but it.

✓ I also like rural areas, but I prefer urban areas.

The clause 'but it' is incomplete and unclear. Replace with a complete contrasting clause. Suggestion: state the contrast explicitly, e.g., 'but I prefer urban areas' or 'but not as much.'

× I like other country view because I don't experience other countries so I'm curious about it.

✓ I like views of other countries because I haven't experienced them, so I'm curious about them.

Several issues: 'other country view' should be pluralized and rephrased to 'views of other countries'. 'I don't experience other countries' is incorrect tense and verb choice; use present perfect 'I haven't experienced them' to indicate life experience. Pronoun 'it' should agree in number with 'countries', so use 'them'. Suggestion: use 'views of other countries' and match pronouns and tense for experiences.