打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答方向是清楚的，但存在明显语法和搭配错误。应说“prefer typing to handwriting”，后面使用完整句子，例如“typing allows me to send messages instantly”。“handwriting is hardly deliberate my message effectively”表达不自然，可以改为“handwriting is slower and less convenient”。建议用“because”连接原因，并补充一个具体使用场景，同时避免句子结构残缺。

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it allows me to send messages instantly. Besides, it is faster and more convenient when I need to write emails or complete work documents.

建議: 答案没有直接回答“使用台式电脑还是笔记本电脑”，而且用“Yes”回答选择性问题不够准确。应先明确选择，例如“I usually type on a laptop”。“rapid technology developments”应改为“rapid technological development”，“our message”应根据语境改为“messages”，“preparent”不是正确单词，可用“prepare documents”。建议说明每天使用的具体场景。

範例: I usually type on a laptop every day because it is portable and convenient. I use it to reply to emails, prepare documents, and attend online meetings.

建議: 回答包含了学习时间和学习内容，但时间表达和句子结构需要改进。“Since my primary school”应改为“When I was in primary school”或“I learned ... in primary school”。“there are such a computer lessons”语法错误，应使用过去时，并说“we had computer lessons”。建议补充具体年龄或学习经历，使答案更自然、更具体。

範例: I learned how to type when I was in primary school, probably at around the age of eight. We had computer lessons, where I learned basic typing skills as well as how to use different software.

建議: 答案提到了练习，但“practice about ten words per minute”表达不准确，因为通常说“type at a speed of ten words per minute”，而且十词每分钟的速度非常慢。应具体说明练习方法，例如使用打字网站、练习盲打和记录速度。“such that”在这里不自然，可以改为“so that”。建议直接使用现在时回答自己的日常方法。

範例: I improve my typing by practising on online typing websites for about fifteen minutes every day. I focus on accuracy first and gradually try to increase my typing speed, so that I can complete work more efficiently.

× I prefer typing to handwriting because typing is lets me to input a message instantly to others.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because typing lets me send a message to others instantly.

“typing is lets”中同时使用了系动词“is”和实义动词“lets”，造成句子结构错误。动词“let”后面接宾语和动词原形，不使用“to”，所以应改为“lets me send”。

× While handwriting is hardly deliberate my message effectively.

✓ Handwriting does not allow me to express my message effectively.

原句以“While”开头，但后面的结构不完整；“deliberate”是形容词，不能直接表示“表达信息”。这里需要使用“allow me to express”来表达“让我有效地表达信息”。

× Yes, because nowadays rapid technology developments allow us to send our message or preparent documents in advance.

✓ Yes. Nowadays, rapid technological developments allow us to send messages or prepare documents in advance.

“technology”是名词，修饰“developments”时应使用形容词“technological”。因此，“rapid technology developments”应改为“rapid technological developments”。

× Yes, because nowadays rapid technology developments allow us to send our message or preparent documents in advance.

✓ Yes. Nowadays, rapid technological developments allow us to send messages or prepare documents in advance.

“preparent”不是正确的英语动词形式。这里与“send”并列，表示“准备文件”，应使用动词原形“prepare”。

× Since my primary school there are such a computer lessons that teach me a lot of computer skills including typing and using different software.

✓ I learned how to type in primary school, where I took computer lessons that taught me many computer skills, including typing and using different software.

回答过去发生的学习经历时，应使用“in primary school”，而不是“Since my primary school”。“Since”通常表示从过去某时开始一直持续到现在，不适合这里的简单过去时语境。

× Since my primary school there are such a computer lessons that teach me a lot of computer skills including typing and using different software.

✓ I learned how to type in primary school, where I took computer lessons that taught me many computer skills, including typing and using different software.

原句使用“There are”来描述个人在小学学习打字的经历，句子结构不自然。这里应直接使用主语“I”，例如“I learned”或“I took”。

× Since my primary school there are such a computer lessons that teach me a lot of computer skills including typing and using different software.

✓ I learned how to type in primary school, where I took computer lessons that taught me many computer skills, including typing and using different software.

“a”只能修饰单数可数名词，因此不能说“a computer lessons”。应改为“computer lessons”或“a computer lesson”。这里使用复数“computer lessons”更符合一般性描述。

× Since my primary school there are such a computer lessons that teach me a lot of computer skills including typing and using different software.

✓ I learned how to type in primary school, where I took computer lessons that taught me many computer skills, including typing and using different software.

问题询问的是过去何时学会打字，因此应使用过去时。原句中的“are”和“teach”应分别改为过去时“took”结构中的“taught”。

× I need to practice about ten words per minute such that I can handle a range of tasks for different requirements.

✓ I need to practice typing at about ten words per minute so that I can handle a range of tasks with different requirements.

“practice”表示练习某项活动时，后面通常接动名词“-ing”形式。因此应说“practice typing”，而不是“practice about ten words per minute”。“at about ten words per minute”表示“以每分钟约十个词的速度”。