打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct sentence fragments. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason with a linking word. Avoid starting sentences with question words like "Which" when continuing a statement.

範例: I prefer typing because it is faster and makes editing easier. For example, when I prepare reports for my colleagues I can quickly revise and share documents, which saves time and reduces mistakes.

建議: Give a complete, well-structured answer: a direct topic sentence followed by one or two specific details. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid run-on sentences. Also correct small grammar issues (e.g., 'the tech company' → 'a tech company'; 'do a lot of files in computers' → 'work on many documents').

範例: Yes, I type on my laptop every day for work. I work at a tech company, so I create and edit many documents that I need to share with colleagues, which is why I use the laptop keyboard constantly.

建議: Organize chronologically with correct tense and fewer short fragments. Use linking words (first, then, later) and correct grammar (articles, verb forms). Provide one specific example of the game or lesson to add detail.

範例: I learned to type in elementary school. First, we had computer lessons where the teacher showed us keyboard basics; later, I practiced with a typing game that taught me proper finger placement. Over time, these activities helped me improve my speed and accuracy.

建議: Produce a clearer, concise answer: state your main method, then give specific examples and use linking words (however, for example). Correct vocabulary ("practice lessons" → "formal lessons"; "shad applications" unclear — clarify or replace).

範例: I mainly improve my typing by learning on the job. For example, I type daily while preparing documentation at work, and I also use online typing exercises in my free time to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I would say I prefer typing mainly because it is much faster and easier to edit my work. Which is so important for me because I have to share my work with my colleagues.

✓ I would say I prefer typing mainly because it is much faster and easier to edit my work, which is very important for me because I have to share my work with my colleagues.

The second fragment 'Which is so important...' is a sentence fragment and needs to be connected to the previous sentence; also 'so important' is informal here and 'very important' fits better. Combine using a relative pronoun 'which' attached with a comma. Keep present tense 'is' and 'have to' consistent. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Yes, I do. I type on my laptop keyboard every day for my work because I work for the tech company so I have to do a lot of files in computers to share with my colleagues and

✓ Yes, I do. I type on my laptop keyboard every day for my work because I work for a tech company, so I have to handle a lot of files on computers to share with my colleagues.

Use 'a tech company' rather than 'the tech company' when not referring to a specific known company; use 'handle' or 'work on' rather than 'do' with 'files'; correct preposition is 'on computers'. Remove trailing 'and'. Subject-verb forms remain present. Grammar problem type ID:2

× As I remember, I learned how to use keyboard in my elementary school.

✓ As I remember, I learned how to use the keyboard in elementary school.

Add the definite article 'the' before 'keyboard' and remove 'my' before 'elementary school' unless specifying a particular one; both are acceptable but 'in elementary school' is more natural. The past tense 'learned' is correct. Grammar problem type ID:5

× We had a computer lessons where teacher taught us how to use the keyboard.

✓ We had computer lessons where the teacher taught us how to use the keyboard.

Use plural 'computer lessons' without 'a' and include the definite article 'the' before 'teacher' because a specific teacher is meant. Maintain past tense 'taught'. Grammar problem type ID:22

× And I also play a game which teach me how to type correctly.

✓ I also played a game that taught me how to type correctly.

The context is past, so use past tense 'played' and 'taught'. Use 'that' or 'which' with correct verb agreement: 'that taught' or 'which taught'. 'Teach' must be past 'taught'. Grammar problem type ID:8

× And as I grew up I develop my typing skills.

✓ And as I grew up, I developed my typing skills.

Past sequence requires past tense 'developed' to match 'grew up'. Add a comma after the introductory clause for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Actually I do not have a particular practice lessons because it's like I'm learning by doing instead I get a chance to practise typing every day through my work when I have to do the documentation or through typing on shad applications which make me type every day.

✓ Actually, I do not have particular practice lessons because I'm learning by doing. Instead, I get a chance to practise typing every day through my work when I do documentation, or by typing on shared applications that require me to type every day.

The original is a run-on with inconsistent verb forms and articles. Break into two sentences; use 'particular practice lessons' without 'a'; use contraction consistently 'I'm'; replace 'do the documentation' with 'do documentation'; correct 'shad' to 'shared' and use 'applications that require me' for clarity and subject-verb agreement. Grammar problem type ID:26