打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid filler phrases and repetition, and correct grammar (e.g., 'it is' not 'it quite').

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting. Firstly, typing is faster and easier for me, especially when editing text on a computer. Secondly, long periods of handwriting often make my hand sore, so typing is more comfortable for extended work.

建議: Give a direct answer (desktop or laptop), then add one or two clear reasons using linking words. Remove hesitations like 'uh' and vague fillers such as 'like'. Improve grammar (e.g., 'it is easy' and 'compared with').

範例: Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I often update work documents and network protocols. Moreover, typing makes it easy to revise and format details compared with handwriting.

建議: Answer directly with a clear time reference, then give one specific supporting detail. Avoid uncertain phrasing ('I think') and unclear descriptions. Use linking words for coherence and correct noun forms (e.g., 'subject called Computer').

範例: I learned to type when I was in primary school. We had a subject called Computer Studies where we practiced typing, and later I entered a typing competition with a classmate which improved my speed.

建議: Give a direct method and one or two specific strategies. Avoid repetition and improve grammar (e.g., 'I type more quickly'). Mention concrete practice techniques and frequency to be more convincing.

範例: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice. For example, I do 20 minutes of online typing exercises every day and practice touch-typing drills to increase speed and accuracy.

× I personally prefer typing because I think it quite easy to type in things just like click on the screen or click on your keyboard, while for handwriting you need to use the pen to write it down on the paper and sometimes my hand will be hurt by using handwriting.

✓ I personally prefer typing because I think it is quite easy to type things, like clicking on the screen or on your keyboard. For handwriting, you need to use a pen to write on paper, and sometimes my hand gets hurt from writing by hand.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' before 'quite easy' (adjective link) and misuses verbs and adverbs ('click' should be 'clicking'). Use 'a pen' and 'on paper' for correct articles and prepositions. 'Will be hurt' is unnatural for habitual result; use 'gets hurt' or 'hurts'. Suggestions: add the verb 'is' after 'think', use gerunds for activities ('clicking'), include appropriate articles ('a pen'), use 'on paper', and use present simple 'gets hurt' for repeated experiences.

× Definitely yes, because I need to uh, write my like detail of the work or even the protocol for the network and I think it easy to rewrite it or just adjust the detail when you compare it like handwriting.

✓ Definitely yes, because I need to write the details of my work or even the protocol for the network, and I think it is easy to rewrite or adjust the details compared to handwriting.

'Detail' should be plural 'details' and needs the article 'the'. The clause 'I think it easy' is missing the verb 'is' (subject-verb agreement). 'Compare it like handwriting' is incorrect; use 'compared to handwriting'. Suggestions: use plural nouns for countable details, include 'is' after 'think', and use 'compared to' for comparisons.

× Umm, as far as I can remember, I think I learned it when I was in a primary school because it has some kind of composite subject is called like computer 1 and it had the topic that I need to type in the class and it says some colleague again that I can type to competition with my my friend.

✓ Umm, as far as I can remember, I learned it when I was in primary school because there was a composite subject called Computer 1, and we had a lesson where I needed to type in class. A classmate also said I could type in a competition with my friend.

Mixes tenses and has incorrect structures: use past tense consistently for past events ('learned', 'was', 'called', 'had'). Replace 'it has' with 'there was' and 'some kind of composite subject is called like' with 'a composite subject called'. 'Colleague' is wrong in this context; use 'classmate'. 'Type to competition with my my friend' should be 'type in a competition with my friend'. Suggestions: keep past tense for past events, use correct vocabulary ('classmate'), and simplify clauses for clarity.

× Oh I would say practice, make it perfect because when I am like comfortable and familiar with the keyboard, I'm typing much more speed as I done it before. So I would say practice.

✓ Oh, I would say practice to make it perfect, because when I am comfortable and familiar with the keyboard, I type much faster than I did before. So I would say practice.

'Practice, make it perfect' needs a connector 'to' or rephrasing. 'I'm typing much more speed' is incorrect: use 'I type much faster' (adverb 'faster' modifies verb). 'As I done it before' is wrong tense and structure; use 'than I did before' for comparison. Suggestions: use 'to' before infinitive, choose correct adverb 'faster', and use past tense 'did' for the earlier state.