打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and structured: start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give 1–2 specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases (e.g., “too bad things”). Use more precise vocabulary (e.g., "handwriting" problems, "convenient for emails").

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it’s faster and more convenient for writing emails and documents. For example, I can easily edit text and send messages quickly, whereas my handwriting is often messy and slow.

建議: Give a direct answer first, then one or two clear reasons with linking words. Avoid unfinished sentences and grammar mistakes (e.g., "I need to more write"). Mention specifics like frequency or tasks to make it concrete.

範例: I type on a laptop every day because I don't have a desktop and I find the laptop convenient for writing emails and short reports. I usually use it for about three to four hours daily for study and work-related tasks.

建議: State the time clearly, then describe briefly how you learned and add one specific detail. Use correct tense and wording (e.g., "I learned in 2015 at a computer centre"). Avoid vague or repetitive phrases.

範例: I learned to type in 2015 after I passed my SSE exam. I attended a local computer centre where I practiced touch-typing, which was difficult at first but became much easier with regular practice.

建議: Provide a clear method and give specific practice activities and results. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct grammar (e.g., "I practice daily by writing emails and short essays to improve speed and accuracy"). Mention measurable improvements if possible.

範例: I improve my typing by practicing every day—writing emails and short essays and using online typing exercises to increase speed and accuracy. As a result, my typing speed has improved and I can type more confidently when preparing academic assignments.

× Actually well I prefer typing because it's too convenient when I need to write in ASAR emails and I usually use my computer but in handwriting it's too bad things when my hand writing is not good.

✓ Actually, I prefer typing because it's much more convenient when I need to write emails, and I usually use my computer; my handwriting is not good, so I find handwriting difficult.

Run-on sentence and awkward phrasing; 'too convenient' and 'too bad things' are incorrect collocations. I split into clearer clauses, replaced 'too convenient' with 'much more convenient', removed 'ASAR' (unclear) and changed 'hand writing is not good' to 'my handwriting is not good'. Suggestions: use punctuation to separate ideas and choose correct collocations.

× So that's why I prefer typing in keyboard or computer as well everything.

✓ So that's why I prefer typing on a keyboard or using a computer for most tasks.

Awkward phrasing and incorrect preposition 'in keyboard'; 'as well everything' is ungrammatical. I used 'on a keyboard' and clarified meaning. Suggestion: use correct prepositions for devices ('on a keyboard', 'on a computer' or 'using a computer') and avoid vague phrases like 'everything'.

× Well, I usually type in laptop because I need to more write in emails or written spot in paragraphs so it is more convenient for me to write in laptop keyboard.

✓ Well, I usually type on a laptop because I need to write more emails and paragraphs, so it is more convenient for me to use a laptop keyboard.

Incorrect prepositions ('in laptop', 'in laptop keyboard') and incorrect word order ('need to more write'). I changed to 'on a laptop', 'write more emails', and 'use a laptop keyboard'. Suggestion: use 'on' for devices and place adverbs like 'more' before the verb phrase where appropriate.

× Also I don't have a desktop so I didn't even use it.

✓ Also, I don't have a desktop, so I have never used one.

Tense and pronoun reference unclear: 'didn't even use it' implies past habitual use but contradicts 'I don't have a desktop'. I changed to present perfect 'have never used one' to show experience up to now and replaced 'it' with 'one' for clarity. Suggestion: match tense to current ownership and use 'one' to refer to a non-specific desktop.

× So actually for me in laptop keyboard is

✓ So actually, for me, a laptop keyboard is better.

Fragment sentence missing completion. I completed the thought with 'is better' to make it grammatical and concise. Suggestion: ensure each sentence has a subject and verb and expresses a complete idea.

× Well, since back twenty fifteen when I was young and passed my SSE exam, then I admitted in a computer centre and just learn about how to how to use in keyboards.

✓ I started in 2015 when I was young and had passed my SSE exam; then I enrolled in a computer centre and learned how to use keyboards.

Multiple errors: 'since back twenty fifteen' is nonstandard, 'admitted in a computer centre' should be 'enrolled in a computer centre', and 'just learn' should be past 'learned'. I used past tense and correct verbs. Suggestion: use 'enrolled' for joining courses and use simple past for completed actions.

× So it is that time it is more difficult for me for nowadays it is too easier for me.

✓ At that time it was more difficult for me, but nowadays it is much easier.

Tense inconsistency and incorrect comparative 'too easier'. I changed to past 'was' for the past reference and 'much easier' for present comparison. Suggestion: keep past events in past tense and use 'much easier' or 'easier' (not 'too easier').

× I practice every day by writing emails and short essay my computers doing this regularly speed and improve accuracy.

✓ I practice every day by writing emails and short essays on my computer to improve speed and accuracy.

Run-on and ungrammatical phrase 'short essay my computers doing this regularly speed'. I restructured to 'short essays on my computer to improve speed and accuracy'. Suggestion: use infinitive purpose clauses ('to improve') and keep nouns plural where appropriate.

× So I can write fast and confidently nowadays.

✓ So I can write quickly and confidently nowadays.

'Fast' as an adverb is acceptable colloquially but 'quickly' is more formal and consistent; no third person singular issue actually present, but improved word choice for adverb. Suggestion: use 'quickly' for formal contexts and place adverbs before adjectives as needed.

× So it is truly help for me when I write something new in my academic section.

✓ It truly helps me when I write new material for my academic work.

Incorrect verb form 'is truly help' and awkward noun phrase 'academic section'. I changed to 'helps me' and 'academic work' for clarity. Suggestion: use correct verb forms (subject + verb) and prefer 'work' or 'assignments' over 'section'.