打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Give a clearer topic sentence, avoid slang (’cause), and add a brief reason with a linking word. Keep it within 2–3 sentences and use slightly more formal vocabulary.

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because my handwriting is quite messy. In addition, typing is faster for me and makes editing easier when I write longer texts.

建議: Start with a direct topic sentence, replace informal contractions (’cause) with formal connectors, and add one specific detail about usage to enrich the answer.

範例: I usually type on a laptop keyboard because I don't own a desktop computer. For instance, I use my laptop daily for studying and writing assignments, so it is more convenient.

建議: Provide a fuller sentence with a clear timeframe and add a brief detail about how or where you learned to type. Use linking words if you expand the answer.

範例: I learned to type when I was at school, around the age of 10. At that time, we had basic computer classes where the teacher taught us proper finger placement and simple exercises.

建議: Clarify the first sentence (it seems about handwriting, not typing), avoid contradictory statements without clear linking, and organize into 2–3 coherent sentences: one about methods and one about results, using linking words like “however” or “therefore” properly.

範例: To improve my typing, I took a two-month typing course where I practiced touch-typing drills every day. In addition, I use online typing programs to build speed and accuracy, so my typing has become much better.

× Usually I prefer typing over handwriting 'cause my handwriting is too bad.

✓ Usually I prefer typing to handwriting because my handwriting is very bad.

The use of 'prefer' should be followed by 'to' when comparing two nouns (prefer A to B). Informal 'cause should be replaced with 'because' in formal grammar. 'Too bad' is awkward here; 'very bad' or 'poor' is clearer. Suggestion: use 'prefer A to B' and avoid contractions in formal responses.

× I usually type on laptop keyboard 'cause I don't have desktop.

✓ I usually type on a laptop keyboard because I don't have a desktop computer.

Countable nouns like 'laptop' and 'desktop' require the indefinite article 'a' when singular. Also 'desktop' commonly takes the noun 'computer' after it for clarity. Replace informal 'cause with 'because'. Suggestion: use articles with singular countable nouns and add 'computer' for clarity.

× When I was in my schooling days.

✓ I learned when I was at school.

The original fragment lacks a clear verb and sounds unnatural. 'Schooling days' is nonstandard in this context. Use 'when I was at school' or 'when I was in school' and include a verb as needed (e.g., 'I learned to type when I was at school'). Suggestion: use 'in/at school' and include a main verb to form a complete sentence.

× I usually write AC paragraph letters to improve my handwriting.

✓ I usually write paragraphs to improve my handwriting.

The phrase 'AC paragraph letters' is unclear and ungrammatical. If the intention is to practice handwriting by writing paragraphs, say 'write paragraphs.' 'Write' followed by plural noun 'paragraphs' is correct. Suggestion: use clear, standard phrases for practice activities (e.g., 'write paragraphs' or 'practice writing letters').

× However, I joined typing classes for nearly two months, so right now I can type well.

✓ However, I attended typing classes for nearly two months, so now I can type well.

Use 'attended' or 'took' rather than 'joined' when referring to participating in classes in the past; 'joined' is possible but 'attended' is more natural. 'For nearly two months' is fine, but the time reference 'right now' conflicts slightly with past 'attended'; 'now' fits better. Suggestion: match past participation verb with current result: 'I attended... so now I can...'.