打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Reduce fillers and be more concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Use vocabulary like "prefer," "comfortable," "tradition," and avoid repetitions.

範例: I prefer handwriting. For example, I find handwriting more comfortable and personal, and it helps me remember information better because I physically write notes rather than just typing them.

建議: Fix grammar and eliminate hesitation. Begin with a direct statement (topic sentence) and add a specific reason using a linking word like "because" or "since." Use correct verb forms ("type," "prefer").

範例: I usually type on a laptop because it is portable and convenient for work, whereas a desktop is less flexible for moving between locations.

建議: Answer directly with correct tense and concise details. Give a specific time or age and a brief context. Avoid irrelevant comments and incomplete sentences.

範例: I learned to type when I was about seven years old. At primary school we had computer classes, and a teacher taught us basic keyboard skills.

建議: Avoid absolute claims; instead describe methods you use to maintain or improve skills. Provide a specific example of practice or tools. Keep it concise and use linking words like "so" or "therefore."

範例: I practice regularly to maintain speed: for instance, I use online typing exercises and set aside 10 minutes daily to do drills, so my accuracy and speed stay high.

× If I have to typing, uh, I'll pre, uh, I'll, uh, use the laptop because I think it's uh, good portal device to uh, work with.

✓ If I have to type, I'll use the laptop because I think it's a good portable device to work with.

The verb after 'have to' should be in the base form, not the -ing form. Also 'portal' is a mischoice; 'portable' is the correct adjective. Include the article 'a' before 'good portable device.' Suggestion: use 'have to' + base verb (have to + verb), check word choice (portable) and include necessary articles.

× I usually prefer writing because, uh, when I am typing, uh, I'm totally uncomfortable and, uh, uh, have I have a bad feeling about typing, uh, because, you know, I like traditional writing, which is handwriting.

✓ I usually prefer writing because when I type, I'm totally uncomfortable and I have a bad feeling about typing, because I like traditional writing, that is, handwriting.

Overuse of filler words aside, the sentence used 'when I am typing' which is acceptable but 'have I have' is a repetition and pronoun/auxiliary order is wrong. Replacing with 'when I type' (simple present for habits) and correcting the clause 'I have a bad feeling' fixes pronoun/auxiliary misuse and redundancy. Also replace 'which is' with 'that is' to clarify the appositive.

× It's, it's an interesting question for me. Uh, by the way, uh, when I was a child, I learned to how use the keyboard, uh, because, uh, I born in 2005 and when I was born, the keyboard was.

✓ It's an interesting question for me. When I was a child, I learned how to use the keyboard, because I was born in 2005 and when I was born, keyboards already existed.

Incorrect sequence and forms: 'learned to how use' is wrong—use 'learned how to use' or 'learned to use.' 'I born in 2005' lacks the auxiliary 'was' ('I was born'). The final clause 'the keyboard was' is incomplete; clarify with 'keyboards already existed.' Use past tense consistent with 'was born' and 'learned.' Suggestion: use correct verb patterns (learned how to + base verb) and include required auxiliary verbs for passive 'be born.'

× Actually, I don't need to improve my typing because, uh, I'm a programmer and I am a fast typer, so I think, uh, I'm good at it. Uh, I don't need any improvements.

✓ Actually, I don't need to improve my typing because I'm a programmer and a fast typist, so I think I'm good at it. I don't need any improvement.

Word choice and noun form: 'fast typer' is less natural than 'fast typist.' 'Improvements' vs 'improvement'—when speaking generally about skill, 'improvement' (uncountable) is preferred. Tense is fine (present). Suggestion: use natural collocations ('typist') and appropriate uncountable/ countable forms ('improvement').