打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and avoid repetition; begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Use correct verb forms and avoid filler sounds (uh).

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I can edit documents quickly and save them in the cloud, which makes it easy to access my work from different devices.

建議: State your main idea first, then support it with a specific reason and a brief example. Correct grammar (use singular/plural correctly) and remove fillers.

範例: I always use my laptop to type because it is lightweight and portable. For instance, I can take it to classes or cafés, which lets me work comfortably outside my home.

建議: Give a clear, direct answer about the time, then explain briefly how you learned and why it helped. Fix the mistaken negative ("couldn't") and avoid repetition.

範例: I learned to type when I was in elementary school during a computer class. The lessons taught me correct finger placement, which was very helpful because it improved my speed and accuracy.

建議: Answer clearly with one or two specific methods you use to improve (practice, online lessons, games), use linking words for coherence, and avoid unclear phrases and fillers.

範例: I improve my typing mainly by practicing regularly and using online typing exercises. For example, I spend 15 minutes every day on a typing website that gives drills and tracks my speed and accuracy, which has helped me type faster.

× In my case, I prefer typing doing working because typing is very convenient for me, so I use it.

✓ In my case, I prefer typing because it is very convenient for me, so I use it.

The phrase 'doing working' is incorrect; after 'prefer' use a gerund or noun (prefer typing). Remove redundant words. Also replace 'typing is very convenient for me, so I use it' with 'it is very convenient for me, so I use it' for natural cohesion.

× Uh, so I usually using my laptop laptop, so I usually prefer typing.

✓ Uh, so I usually use my laptop, so I prefer typing.

The form 'usually using' is incorrect; use the simple present 'usually use' for habitual actions. Remove the repeated word 'laptop' and avoid repeating 'usually' twice.

× I I always use my laptop, uh, it is very convenient for me because uh, laptop is so light, so I can carry everywhere I go giving my laptop.

✓ I always use my laptop; it is very convenient for me because the laptop is very light, so I can carry it everywhere I go.

Use the definite article 'the' when referring back to a specific laptop already mentioned. 'Carry everywhere I go giving my laptop' is ungrammatical; use 'carry it everywhere I go'. Also remove duplicate 'I' and add punctuation for clarity.

× When I was younger, uh, there was a computer class in my elementary school, so I couldn't learn about typing method.

✓ When I was younger, there was a computer class in my elementary school, so I learned about typing methods.

'Couldn't learn about' contradicts having a class; use past simple 'learned' to indicate acquiring the skill. Also use plural 'typing methods' or 'the typing method' for natural phrasing and remove hesitation filler 'uh'.

× It it was very beneficial for me.

✓ It was very beneficial for me.

Duplicate 'It' should be removed; this fixes the sentence structure.

× There are many messages, but my favorite muscle is uh, I, I usually usually using my laptop to typing, typing.

✓ There are many methods, but my favorite is using my laptop to type.

'Messages' and 'muscle' are incorrect word choices; likely meant 'methods'. Use 'favorite is using' for correct structure, and 'to type' (infinitive) after 'using my laptop' or simply 'use my laptop to type'. Remove duplicate words.

× So, uh, I try to try to do typing, uh, many times.

✓ So I try to practice typing many times.

'Try to try to do typing' is repetitive and awkward. Use 'try to practice typing' or 'practice typing' to express repeated effort. 'Practice' is a better verb collocated with 'typing'.

× It is so beneficial for me.

✓ It is very beneficial for me.

This sentence is grammatically correct but 'so beneficial' is informal; 'very beneficial' is preferable in a test context. Change is optional for register consistency.